Sunset

yea know it looks way better.

It's not really working for me. You've created two focal areas and it's causing me to look from one side to the other. If you bought the girl more closer to the center, it would narrow the focal area.
I also think the "Sunset" text could be a bit smaller so that the text starts and finishes inline with the boxes.
It's got nice colouring and blending... it's just the layout that needs a bit of work

I cant really move her to the center since its a stock image But moving the text closer to the focal might help