too darn bright... and too much negative space... text needs some work... and i like v2 more then v1
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too darn bright... and too much negative space... text needs some work... and i like v2 more then v1
love the sig dude ! but not sure if i am a fan of the big black area's... but still really nice job !
Thanks Fatal!
:)
Text fits nicely here. Try not positioning the focal so centered. Also, the effects you used are nice but make them more heavier and the choice of colour must be better. Its off. Work on the contrast.
Not a bad sig. Room for improvement though:)
it's to bright and the sudden cutoffs kill it for me.. i'd smudge that sumwhat into the dark spaces.
Although i don't really like this tag i find it has some potential. The lighting is the string point of this tag.(especially in the BnW version). I reall y wish you had of spreaded this out to the sides so it doesn't have a sudden stop. I've noticed some cuts in the effects too. Some of them seem to be in half. I really think the lighting/effects should have been erased from the guys hair too. You should never put effects over the focal.
It isn't bad but you should try some tuts. KIU
Thanks Shorter:)
Like i said
Not my best....:(