Spiderman - Fav

Hmm. Good work on the depth, I think you did that well. I'm not digging the text. There's too many different colors here in my opinion. I'm seeing all sorts of pinks, yellows, blues, purples, oranges, reds, browns and so on. It's just too many colors in not enough space. There's not much flow but there does seem to be some developing in his left arm and just under the text. Lighting also needs some work. Keep trying, you're getting there.

Thanks.

So, now I know that there is too much going on and I can see that with the clipping masks.

I was trying to keep the flow, but I kinda lost it when I added the C4D's on the bottom left.

Text I already know is crap, just experimenting atm until I get better.

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I'm seeing all sorts of pinks, yellows, blues, purples, oranges, reds, browns

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So what, I'm multi-cultural?

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Originally Posted by Mega

Thanks.



So what, I'm multi-cultural?

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I lolled :p

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Originally Posted by GFX_MC

it is a bit over stuff it looks like u wanted to add alot of stuffed to the sig
the text is ok i like the blue over his arm but im dont like the box like things and the yellow spot on his head isnt working the smudging on the left side is to dark in my opinion

Well all in all a pretty good tag Good work

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Ok, Im not a wealth of information when it comes to sigs and art. however I do like your work alot. I know from my past criques that everything is going right with the basics, I was thinking maybe try matching lighting effects on his head with the blue over his arm. Is there any way you can change the color of your light source on his his to a light blue? I think maybe it may flow a little better, just a suggestion to try, and if it doesnt work then once again i have to tell you that im new to this stuff :p

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Originally Posted by Mega

Definitely my favorite so far.

http://i33.tinypic.com/2zovv3o.png

CnC please?

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Drop the boxes, and the text. The stroke looks terrible on them, and they're way too attention grabbing. Your focus should be on your stock, since it's just so much nicer to look at than your text, so stop trying to grab the eye with it. I'd clean up his face a little, too, there's too much going on overtop of it. I'd also try and do some more subtle things to bring the focus more to your stock, like darkening the outside edges, or desaturating them, by the tiniest bit. The key to doing that properly though, is subtlety.
Tight effects, just needs more work to bring attention to them, so the eye isn't all over the place.

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Originally Posted by Vicious Zen

Drop the boxes, and the text. The stroke looks terrible on them, and they're way too attention grabbing. Your focus should be on your stock, since it's just so much nicer to look at than your text, so stop trying to grab the eye with it. I'd clean up his face a little, too, there's too much going on overtop of it. I'd also try and do some more subtle things to bring the focus more to your stock, like darkening the outside edges, or desaturating them, by the tiniest bit. The key to doing that properly though, is subtlety.
Tight effects, just needs more work to bring attention to them, so the eye isn't all over the place.

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Yes, I cleaned it up, http://i35.tinypic.com/2qwmnid.png

The edges are darkened. I just don't find it to be suitable to darken it too much.
Text I know already isn't that great.