OLD MAN PWNAGE

Awful text, depth/flow need work. Not feeling it overall

wow m8 why don't u tell him how to fix it then ? MR sirius GN

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Originally Posted by SiriusGN

Awful text, depth/flow need work. Not feeling it overall

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Wow im sorry dude but what gives you the right to comment on all my pieces and just be negative as Sirenzo said tell me what to do to improve,Though im not sure that you know alot since all you have done to your sig is blur the bg and add some huge text...

i think tis a awsum piece. lot is said allready. imo i see three things that could be improved.
firts the bright spot at the left bottom, i would tone it down and maybe color it. second the color of the sword stands out and never comes back in the sig, so i would change that. third is the flow, wich is bidirectional. I feel the flow from left top to right bottom and i would smudge the right side of the sig in that direction. I love the depth in this sig, wich is also obtained by the claws... brilliant!!

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Originally Posted by Xelo

i think tis a awsum piece. lot is said allready. imo i see three things that could be improved.
firts the bright spot at the left bottom, i would tone it down and maybe color it. second the color of the sword stands out and never comes back in the sig, so i would change that. third is the flow, wich is bidirectional. I feel the flow from left top to right bottom and i would smudge the right side of the sig in that direction. I love the depth in this sig, wich is also obtained by the claws... brilliant!!

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Yeah i tried to tone it down but it was fire from the stock and it was kinda hard...
About The sword... I don't know what to do with that...but i don't see what's wrong with it

and about the flow that was the direction the roof went in on the stock and kinda stuck i didnt smudge in those directions btw :P

Double post wtf?

It looks lq to me. I like the use of the splatter though.

It was originally a digital painting how high quality can you get?

Take a shot at my work because you don't want to accept my CC? Lol, you don't know what I've done do it, so please, don't talk about what you don't know

Anyway, there's too much splatter so there's no sense of flow, and as I told you, scrap the text. I honestly don't know how you could fix the depth but it's not clicking. Play around with blurs and lighting.

your cnc doesn't help him it just negative talk and being mean show some respect and tell him why u feel it doesn't work and help him improve by giving him ideas how to fix it. now tone down your attitude siriusGN. to give it more depth use some burn tools and go to filter sharpen but make a new layer and copy your previous image , then go to filter sharpen and lower the opacity if it's too strong and eras areas that shouldn't have it. gl bro kiu

try this m8 it might help i hope lol .
http://a.imageshack.us/img411/6561/k...structions.png
Blue = burn tool
Green = erase the areas of the copied layer of sharpen.