lighting is pretty good but where is it coming from ? colors go very well with your stock or render , did u mean to put splatter over your boarder ? ps also it looks like u may have 2 light sources one from the front and one from the back is that right ? or is that just from your c4d layer? its definitely clean and i agree i would move the text a smidgen not far. kiu m8 not a bad looking tag just a few ?s is all .