TRUKENDOOS XL

the foot is a bit odd, but anws i like the yellow lines there, but yeah its too empty.

I know this would be a pain in the butt, but I think you should color the guy. This would look soooo much better if he was colored. Not that it doesnt look good now but I like color :-P

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Originally Posted by adCAR

decent idea man :) except your linework around the actual figure is wayyyyyy too messy :/ it has to get cleaned up I think, I can see you were going for that look but it's nor working , especially with the font you used :) fix that up and it should be good :)

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this, plus try a couple of different fillers to make a better composition...meaning you have too much of a black background :)

This is pretty tight, I like the style, I like the vibe.

I think you should clean up the lines around the figure though, jus tone them down a little bit. They're stealing just a little too much thunder from the figure itself.

That leg it's bothering me, but I know it's possible. I think maybe you should lower the belt angle, so it's pointing just a little further downwards, as if it were riding a little higher on that side. I think that might make the position of the leg a little more natural looking,.

why's everyone talking about the leg not looking natural? the point is, that it doesn't have to look natural...

http://www.hiphop.gr/subjects/boty08/rubberlegz.jpg