text isn't really visible, maybe burn tool on text to make it stand out, kiu looks great
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text isn't really visible, maybe burn tool on text to make it stand out, kiu looks great
Colours: monotone
Flow: way off
Lighting:bad, could be better with a diff kinda style
Depth:i kinda like the depth of this tag cuz you could really see the focal although i think the tag is over blurred
Effects:you add effects to imprve the flow but as you can see here, they're just floating around....
Text: just remove it, it'll look better without that text.
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Colors:I like the colors, they feel warm and inviting.
Flow: The flow is nice
Lighting: I like the softness
Depth: its nice
Effects: are great imo
Text: needs some work, i can't read what it says, but i do like the idea.
Overall you have a nice tag there, keep up the good work.