The text is fine, I would lower the opacity on it to combat it from pulling away from your focal. And as for the blending in the second one, you could (just a suggestion) duplicate your original render, then move it above and smudge lightly and just a tad bit away from less busy area's set it to overlay and make your bottom layer visible again. Makes it blend in without giving a blur and you can keep the original crispness of the render like monroe said.
11-20-2010, 03:57 PM
draghen
Congratulations.. is very nice work
11-20-2010, 04:01 PM
silent_assasin
I think it needs some work on the background, its really really empty appart from the guy and a few splatters (i suggest that you work on more splatters over it). On the other hand, the splatters are excelentley done. The text is well done except the placement, which could be higher up. Good work, KIU
