duh i didnt say its messy, i sayd i took stuff off - cuz i though its messy,
now its more clean, too much clean i guess, too blured, text to big.
:/ ahhh
hard to make good tag this days :D haha
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duh i didnt say its messy, i sayd i took stuff off - cuz i though its messy,
now its more clean, too much clean i guess, too blured, text to big.
:/ ahhh
hard to make good tag this days :D haha
It's great, but not your best Linda.
There needs to be more foreground effects.
The background is great, a bit over blurred, but otherwise it's fine.
Text placement is fine, but it could be smaller and the overall appearance of it could be better.
Lighting is good, but you should work on where it darkens out and what not.
Considering you have a large canvas here, the range of your lighting needs to be bigger.
So, basically you need to make it brightest at your main lighting focus and make it slowly come down to darkness.
Lighting effects, burning and dodging could really help with that.
More colors would be nice too, it seems monotone.
Just a suggestion, some nice effects placed on the encryption on his body would be really great and would give this a nice 'wow' factor.
Great work otherwise, the atmopshere is great, depth is good, lighting is okay and you used your canvas really well.
Good job Linda, keep it up ;)!
