night elf

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Originally Posted by Timentia

it has 40 layers lol

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Awhaaa, im amazed it looks so simple.
Well not simple as in easy. It just has such an harmonic impression about it.

v3:
http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/...ending-2-1.png

You've grasped a decent concept, but you lack major effects and depth as well.
Nothing pops in this piece, which makes it extremely flat and boring, which is bringing down your depth.

There doesn't seem to be any major effects here.
Your blending is decent, but by smudging the hair and the ear, it makes it look poor and amateur.

Remove the text, it's slapped on and isn't needed.
Border could go as well.

Mainly need to work on your effects here.
Keep it up.

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Originally Posted by Joey x

You've grasped a decent concept, but you lack major effects and depth as well.
Nothing pops in this piece, which makes it extremely flat and boring, which is bringing down your depth.

There doesn't seem to be any major effects here.
Your blending is decent, but by smudging the hair and the ear, it makes it look poor and amateur.

Remove the text, it's slapped on and isn't needed.
Border could go as well.

Mainly need to work on your effects here.
Keep it up.

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have you seen v3? :3

Yes.
I stand by my point. You're still lacking effects in your smudging.

kay ill add some more fx then maybe tmrw

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Originally Posted by ketg

i don't particularly like v2
i prefer v1
maybe add a nebula stock or a star stock
to get a magical /spacey feel to it
fractals might work nicely with it as well
not bad
kiu

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I agree, add some mystical magic in there and it will look lot more, as not much is going on in the background

Also, I think it may be worth doing some light smudging on the woman (top layer)
adds a bit more imo!
Great tag though bro, KIU

i think you should add more darker smudes on the left since you have a single dark smudge

v3 needs a little bit more saturation but very nice

There are lots of empty spaces there.

Use fractals to eliminate those empty spaces. Nice flow btw.