Intimacy

Good shading on the hands, however elsewhere it is a bit sloppy. I love the shading on the bra strap, however the left bra strap and cup is too edgy and harsh. The highlights and the shading on the right side of the body IMO lacks good shape arrangement and I think a lack of them, which is why at the current time it seems too unfinished and indiscernable. I like the details on the hands and how they trail into the arms. The skintone the body and that of the arms is significantly different.

Are you finished with this or is this a WIP? I think its unfinished and its inconsistent unless if you have a reason for that, like to show some type of pale areas? Thats just my thought.

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Originally Posted by shiv96

I still looks as though its from the front. Also, it looks like its her arms, not the dudes.

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This, got my confused for a while :p

Thanks, Making the 2 bodies discernible from each other was a challenge. I just tweaked it, giving the man a darker skin tone, and the woman a lighter one.

Takken, try taking off a bra, and watch how the shadows and highlights are, as fabric stretches, twists, and bends you get weird shapes, including a lot of sharp angles.

The only thing I might change, is add a little hint of the mans left side on the right were the shadows are.