I don't think anything really blends well in terms of the render except for his shirt. So I think some gradiant maps and possibly hueing the effects to apply with the gradiant maps more would help. I defiantly prefer the non-text version because your text seems to be a focal and just looks bad IMO. I don't think the c4d in front of the render really compliment him that well. I wish I could see more of him, or at least fit some more c4d into the background. The c4d and render seem just sort of "placed" there. Your light source and over all lighting seem to be non-existent. The rest of the tags just seem to have random effects :(.
Hope I helped. I don't really believe in just saying KIU or nice job.
All of that was from my heart <3
