I agree with everything said above. Plus you should also work on curving your lines. They don't flow well enough. If you know what I mean.
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I agree with everything said above. Plus you should also work on curving your lines. They don't flow well enough. If you know what I mean.
add more levels of lighting in there. 3 shades looks bad. I usually go for about 5 - 7 to get a good sense of shape in there.. also the ear needs work :)
Pretty good for a first , reminds me of something from a bioshock poster :D
I can see your shading is really dark , try to do multiple layers when vectoring ,
making every top layer just a tad lighter than the last, also more detail's in the hair would really make this pop , kiu :D
