Batman grunge

Hey i made some changes ;)

Here my first Versiion ( for comparison )

http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3...mangrunge2.png

Here my Second Version ( after tips of you guys )

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2058/batmangrunge3.png

As i dont feel the need to create a new thread about this
Ill just post it here :)

This what i am currently working on:

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/623...awesomealp.png

Okay about the first 2 tags,

Yur batman has a major problem. You have created 2 focals one is the batman symbol and the second is batman. When working in tags you should try to base your image around one major focal, not having the viewers eyes going everywhere. Secondly, you did better moving your batman over but as you can see from your batman that he has light thast hitting his chest, yet there is no light in your tag doing that.
Because you are trying new things I would suggest to you for now to work with your renders, example this badman is dark behind him and light falling on his face and chest, so try and make your b/g and lights do th very same thing, later when you become more experienced you can start to manipulate your focals to be darkened and lightened where you desire.
For fixing the double focal part I would suggest to you to either take out your big batman symbol or to move it more behind him.

p.s you did start a new thread about this creep image and I commented, so I won't comment again on it.