My first smudge tag

I'd have to agree with Moose, truthfully. The body is barely prevalent enough to even register. Truthfully I find just smudging your stock in two separate angled directions to be kinda boring, and overdone. But that's just me. If this is the style you're after though, I'd recommend adding in more smaller detail work. The type isn't really working for me here either. Both the font, and the placement seem really unfitting. Decent tag, good colors, and definitely a good start, I just feel like there's more you could do with it.