3/10 sorry man, but i see very few effects, two focals, no depth, text on blending options, i'd take out the focal on the right, spruce up the effects (add in a few clipping masks or something) add depth w/ blurring, use some filters/c4d's if you want, play with it
5/10 better, bright and the text needs a lot of work, i actually like the colors, but the blending needs work, he's blended oddly in the weirdest places, keep at it!!