I find the colors a bit uninteresting. I'd put some orange stuff in there too, so there's something that stands out and to focus on.
Great job, but keep working on it! :)
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I find the colors a bit uninteresting. I'd put some orange stuff in there too, so there's something that stands out and to focus on.
Great job, but keep working on it! :)
:lol: hahaha sorry i couldn't resist .... (i do this with poems in english lit too :lol:Quote:
Originally posted by Dreiko Shadrack@1 Hour Ago
This piece is right up my alley............................very in-between ............................................ too much ................. through ................................. it's ..strong ............................. very well worked ......
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id but one of the words or all of them upside down but it's fine the way it is i jst think it would fit in with the title more
Bastard :lol:Quote:
Originally posted by deadloader@1 Hour Ago
:lol: hahaha sorry i couldn't resist .... (i do this with poems in english lit too :lol:
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very very good, i love the text, and some of the 'random' kinda stuff. looks great.
