ahh the final more or less is a lot better. i still think you need to increase the transpreancy of one of the girl renders or blend/smudge it better, just both seem to be competing with eachother for prominance. but i do like your latest one.
You need to fix up the name text, still a tad to high, getting chopped off. but all in all its a damn nice sig that is worth using i reckon.
