well i found my end result to dark so i added a hue/saturation adjustment layer with +14 lightness, +14 hue to make it a little green (i like green :P), and -7 desaturation.
Not bad. I don't really like the colors though, but that is personal preference. It could use some more smudging and you could probably duplicate the fractal and move it so it looks thicker. The text isn't too bad but I don't like the color too much.
Not bad though. Keep it up.
08-08-2010, 03:39 AM
Chron_
followed it again and tried to take in some of your advice, but this time i used a render with a bit more of a horizontal flow.
i outlined the text with a 1px black stroke to make it stand out more.
08-08-2010, 11:19 AM
Cap'n Jazz
The color of the render doesn't go to well with the fractal. You shouldn't smudge the gun either. This isn't too bad though. I like the Clank one more.
08-08-2010, 12:31 PM
Chron_
yeah i tried to recolor the fractal (i wanted to use a different one but i'm terrible at finding C4D renders (it's a c4d render right?)), but it looked really bad. i tried to make it like a grey-blue color... didnt work :P
08-09-2010, 09:07 AM
Cap'n Jazz
Well fractals are different than C4D's but sometimes they accomplish a similar effect. No C4Ds were used in this one.
08-22-2010, 08:48 PM
fullmetall21
well this is what i came up with not so good but I'm a little rusty...(haven't used photoshop for over 2 months... :( )