or does that mean you cant find that much lol
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or does that mean you cant find that much lol
i checked through 3 pages lol. lets see, 3 pages=3 good critiques and i criqued like 100 pages. 100:3=33x3=99 good criques[in avarage]
really good idea here :D the biggest issue I can point out is no real depth, if irl those effects where there they would cast on him shadow and give off the feels of being near him, in this case there is no real depth but just nice placement.
I would suggest a few things here, one would be to go in between your layers and take a gray filled layer, put it on soft light, than take your burn tool and with low op lightly brun some areas that the render is is being hiden from, so near the base of him, these effects are very skinny, so to give it some jawsome epic real touch, go in with a small brun size and try and lightly trace where the effects are casting shadow on him, your light is coming from the top left, so it would naturally be giving off the shadow in the same direction.
One more idea with the atmosphere, the colour and light is great, but it needs a little helping to pull the eye to the real focus ( this being batman) so going up to the top of your layers, take a black soft brush. low op an low fill, and lightly edge around the outside of it leaving inside clean, than either leave it as it is if you like, or try going on overlay/softlight and playing with the opacity/fill and see how you feel about it. This will help the eye focus on the true image and draw it inwards to the center of the tag :) going on overlay or softlight will help keep the dark areas shaded but the light areas still bright.
This kind of step seems to be often left out by a lot of taggers, but it greatly helps with atmosphere and depth :D
Hope I gave you soemthing to chew on ^^
Edit: I jsut read the last page and I'm saying now, drop all the bs, leave this guys thread to his tag, say your piece about his tag and leave your own statments about one another to yourselves, thanks ;)