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first one is too blurry and clouded, the text isnt good and it's too monotone. It's like you just covered it up with smoke.
5/10
second one the text is bad imo and the smudging doesnt make it blend it just looks out of place. more effects would be nice and a better bg.
6/10
6/10.
A bit mono.
w8 i just commented on this. xD.
Face too bright.
8/10 Like the effects and the text, but it look way to messy IMO.
7/10 The bg look cool, but the effects don't do their "job"... more effects should do it.
8/10 Great job on the text and effects.. Looks very natural
8/10
You should clip mask the text. IMO.
to me, you should use a white border for light sigs.
Black doesnt fit.
Other than that GJ on the sig.
I've already commented the first one. 8/10 It looks awesome, but it's way too messy for me.
The abstract 9.5/10. Love the colors, the text looks great, but maybe a 1px border should be better IMO.
#1: 8/10 - I love the render (:)) I just feel that the transition between render and background goes a bit too fast around the leg area wich makes the entire dissapearing into the smudge look a bit "awkward", otherwise awsome.
#2: 9/10 - Just looks awsome tbh:)
8.5/10 - Flow is awesome and so are effects. Maybe text and lighting could use some work but its still damn good :)
7/10 Colors of the c4d/smudge look a bit messy.To bright on right side
8/10 LOVE THE SMUDGE! the c4d on his arm is Okk I lighting is to strong:)
1st: 8/10
2nd:7/10
I like them both :)
