Love the text blend. There's to much and to visible effects who takes over the whole thing.
6/10
Not gonna rate this one cuz Its made from a tut. Nice outcome thou ;)
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Love the text blend. There's to much and to visible effects who takes over the whole thing.
6/10
Not gonna rate this one cuz Its made from a tut. Nice outcome thou ;)
5.5/10, Choice of colours is good. Too messy though, a lot of un-needed effects like the wavy greenish things. Not a fan of the BG either. That line of fire thing seems completely pointless to me. The pointless BG and effects just destroy the sig for me. Other than that, the render is blended nicely, the leafy effects complement the render and like I said, choice of colour is good.
4/10, for a sprite sig, the flow in this one is REALLY bad. You have to understand that because sprites don't look good by themselves (because they are really plain), the effects that complement them have to stand out much more than normal sigs. Try to pick a sprite that's actually performing an action, it's easier to create a flow with that. You might also want to take a look at rezolute's sprite sig. He did a bang up job with his even though his sprite was in a standing position. Other than that, the text looks good but I can hardly see it, the colours are an eyesore, it's not smooth enough. Try using some layer adjustments like gradient maps or photo filters.
For me, I made my effects stand out to attract more attention toward the effects. Of course, I still sharpened the sprite and blurred the effects, and the main focal is still the sprite itself. Btw, I followed Splinter's tut for this sig. Not step by step, but I did get the basics from there.
6/10, once again, the effects aren't doing much for me. The colours clash, and I don't know why but it looks a little LQ.
In a nutshell, read up on Splinter's sprite sig tutorial and try to cut down on unnecessary effects. Sometimes, more doesn't mean better. Sorry man, my critique might seem harsh but I know you can do better work than this, I've seen them before. Oh and why can't you rate a sig that was made from a tut? Some tuts are hard to follow and thus, most of them require you to add in a touch of your own.
Awesome work mam but to me there is alot of empty space other then that its just a great sig
8/10
this one is just flawless
10/10
5/10, nice effects. Clipping masks destroy the sig though. Imo it would look better without those. Not a fan of the text as well. Your BG is TOO empty. Render is a painted kind of art work so it looks a little blurry, no depth whatsoever. I think you should redo this, sharpen the area you want to be your focal and blur the rest, this would add depth, add something to the BG, remove the clipping masks, maybe add a lightsource, read Papa's text tut, and you're good to go.
Thanx ^u^ No im pretty good att taking critics and Its just for the good.
And those two signs already had some critics, the alba sig is in version 4, so its been worse. And i know, im a c4d ripple whore ^u^
My sprite is a half failure, too much smudge and no action. Tryd to make a sprit sign with the method of a regular one, obvious that it didnt succeed, and at the current state im stuck whit that.
About youre papa tut sign. I think Its ok to follow a tut and use youre own render and touch, but when you use the same render as the creator you seams more as a copycat. I think tuts for guidelines, not kinda ripping,
But i must say that yours better looking then papas ;)
No hard feelings.
Of course not! We're all here to help each other improve. I've seen much of your work and I think you can definitely do better.
Just cut down on the C4D whore-ing and try to use some layer adjustments to blend your colours nicely.
*Swosh*
''The sounds of Radillac going to c4d rehab''
7/10. Love the colouring, but I'm not a fan of chaotic sigs.
8/10. Effects are nice. The render is a bit small though.
7/10 looks pretty good but plain at same time, nice clipping mask but dont like the text warmth!
8.5/10 loooks really nice blends great nice effects and i love the text! :D
5/10 Uhh... Yea..
5/10 You used brushes for effects.
10 out of 10
ET TU RULES :D
The splatter near the render is good but the rest of them Isnt that good.
Dosnt like the text, Its to 3D, while the sig is flat. No good comb.
Like the color and the girl thou ^u^
6.5/10
actually didnt liked colors.
and i think you need to remove that number. dont like the text placement too.
5/10
this one is a bit better.
still. I would use some GMs to make collors better.
+1 for alba :D
6,5/10
sorry. this isnt becouse you gave me 6,5/10.
I just keep 9 and 10 for better ones :)
9/10, I've rated yours before. +1 for the girl though. Haha
Ehrm... Oki then hind, ill rate youre papa sign :p Happy?
Much cleaner and cooler outcome than papa's ^u^
Love everything except the right sides repeat effect and the bars on the text.
8.8/10
7/10. I like some of the C4D use, but some could be erased as some of it clashes. Colouring is great. Text could be better. Solid sig though.
8/10. Nice effects near focal. Bit empty so try get some text in there maybe? Again, colours are great and fitting. Good job.
:D
9.5/10 Lovely work aside from 3rd may.. it seems out of place imo
8/10 colors are kinda odd. Nice otherwise.
9/10
7/10...if u wanna call it a sig lol
top 1 just lower the contrast and its good
the lower sig is kinda boring, however the blurred bg seems detailed, i think making that pop out more will make it alot better
:P
Edit: i was too late :p this one on bluice thou!
You really got some nice effects there, but youre hiding the sprite behind it to much. Makes him all blurry.
Tone down all the white lines.
The signs is soo long and not very high and thats why the thick border makes youre sign look even smaller and compressed. Try stroke 1pix and paint the sides with 3 pix pen brush.
Dont like the text thou.
7/10 cuz of the nice effects ^u^
8.0/10 nice colors
8.1/10 nice effects
6/10
8/10
1st to me its not done, i think the colors could be worked on a bit, maybe put in some effects and a photo filter in it :P
2nd like the concept, i cant read the txt, changing that and maybe blending the render alittle better would make it alot better
nice ones.
6,8/10 for first
and 6,4/10 for second one
8.5/10, simple, nice and kinda funny. Lol
6,8/10
7.2/10
6/10
6/10
8/10
7.5/10
6/10
5/10
7/10
9/10
4/10
3/10
7/10
7/10
focal is too dark immo.
and I'm not a fan of BW sigs.
anyway. interesting.
so I know its takkens I give him 7/10
second one is awesome.
dont like the text tho
do to deadless 8,5/10
7/10
to me this sig has a interesting render but seems too dark on the bottom to match the bg
the bg is plain, maybe add something in it (sry idk what lol but it does need something i promise lol)..although the bg is probably plain intentionally lol
i love what u have done with it....so far lol :)
7/10
8/10 (It was nice text tag, i voted for ya on that one :p )
8/10 on first, I like the typography
6/10 on second. It seems a little bland, and I'm not a big fan of the trendy lines.
11/10 , awesome :p
7/10
6/10 looks unfinished
7/10
7.4/10 nice colors:)
7/10
I like the typography one.
7/10
7.5/10 nice:)
The color combination is really bad. 3/10
You have not change it a bit since you've asked for tips, and you did get some really good ones. 5/10