You did a pretty good job on blending the ship in and the colors are good too. I think the bottom part is a little to bright, might wanna tone it down so the focus is brought more to the upper part or the sig. Yeah croping it a bit would work.
And one last little thing, you got a white line in the upper right corner, might wanna get rid of that one.
Other than that it's great. Good job and I'm looking forward to see the version with text in it.
Interesting tutorial. I will post my decent outcome soon.
04-20-2011, 06:25 AM
cc.RadillacVIII
In my opinion it's very bright and white which makes it a bit flat. I would suggest you to play around some more with the adjustment layers to implant a tad more colors. And try to bring out the focal more.
The text color stands out to much, try to use one of the colors from the rest of the sig or apply a clip mask. Make the text bigger and you might want to try a simpler and more regular font.
However the sig is very smoot and brings a calm to the viewer. Good job and I would love to see some more colors ^u^
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I will be waiting Shane, take your time :)
Yeah it's pretty decent, not much to complain about except the text. Bring the characters closer together (change the tracking) and move it closer to the focal. Other than that it's pretty good, well done on the adjustments ;)
04-20-2011, 12:11 PM
imShane
Thanks Radillac, I really appreciate it since i'm a big fan of yours.
06-03-2011, 03:20 PM
wfcamb
Whoaoowowee! O.o I'ma be a bit overwhelmed by this one.. Maybe I should stick to something a little easier to start out with.. :p
06-03-2011, 03:26 PM
cc.RadillacVIII
That's totally up to you ^u^
06-03-2011, 05:20 PM
wfcamb
OK.. No one laugh.. :p This is my first attempt!! :) **Ignore the text.. That's gonna happen on another day.. ;)**
EDIT: Yes, I kinda did my own thing in the middle somewhere.. :p Actually, I started huge, like wallpaper sized then down to a sig.. Here's the wallpaper size: http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s...orial1_wal.jpg
EDIT 2: I wanted to add this sig to another graphics forum I'm on and they have a limit of 500x150px.. Here's what I came out with on a smaller scale.. Basically, I just needed to find the right place to crop and add a different text: http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s...ial1_sigTA.jpg