My webpage layout design

Here's my layout for my actual site: http://dissolvedsolutions.com/kyra
(Name for site still thinking if I wanna keep it or not :unsure: )

http://dissolvedsolutions.com/kyra/fd_webdesign.jpg

Any suggestions on improvement?

Ah, please keep the original curso, not the +.

Its ok. The banner at the top just suddenly "ends", =|

The navigation, could be moved over the right more. The white lines go to far over, along with some of the other elements. Just kinda blend it all a bit more.


PLEASE get rid of the music.......xD

Haha okay I'll fix it up, and the music was just a goofy add on I put cause my buddys wanted it, plus I love how people get scared when the music comes on and they don't know where it came from, entertains me ^ ^ lol

Lol, yeah I kinda freaked out at first. I meant to say move th navigation over to the left not right.


=)

Yeah, definitely get rid of that music. I almost always love the layouts of anime sites, even if they aren't technically perfect in terms of designing professionally.


If you need someone to help you with graphics and such for the site, i'd love to. Every site i've asked to work for has been run by a douche, however....but you seem pretty cool.

Yea, i love the header. The only thing i dislike is the music, i'd keep it on the site, but add a mute option. Or a play / pause thing.

And also move the navigation bar to the left =)

Yeah I was thinking of adding a play/pause button, or jukebox option or something, to make it more interactive. And I'll move the navigation bar over to the left, should it be touching the pink content area or should there still be a little of the background colour showing through?

Thankyou Xtremerunnerars. Help is always nice, I'll ask you if I need asistance on anything ^_^ (Yay I seem cool)

EDIT: Here's another webpage I got started: http://www.dissolvedsolutions.com/kyra/The...tate/lobby.html
it's in construction right now but if anyone has any ideas what I should do to improve it feel free to comment.

Theyre both really nice, but i especially like the first one. And if its not a professional site, keep the music < its your site :)

Thankyou, yeah I might keep the music just add a stop button just incase people get annoyed lol XD
Or wait...do I want to annoy my visitors.... kekeke :ph34r: joking XD

Looks very nice but change the font and the cursor :(