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Well, it was fun, I was going for something else though.... but this came out right too. I already though about my next one, next time, im going to plan it.....
http://www.deviantart.com/view/22233964/
CnC, guys...
I need 1 from Jack this time :P .....
And I was going to give a try at edits at illustrator, but never got how to use it well..... :)
Jack is going to say....
Use 3dsm because it's more proffesional, but c4d is more user-friendly.
It is really pretty nice for a first although the 3d is very small and it lacks some depth its not horrendous.
Lacks depth like ^^, and its too small. MAKE IT BIG!!
Dont like at all, use more techstuff.. and the name is wannabe post-modern.. i mean c'mon
^ Ok, I guess I'll try "core" explosion trend-whore next time......
haha, "no matter what asains say, make it big"Quote:
Originally posted by MystiKal@Aug 27 2005, 08:04 PM
Lacks depth like ^^, and its too small. MAKE IT BIG!!
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Starting out with a size on large art always pokes me in the head... I dunno what size to start off with.......
very nice and abstract very good tear look throught out it only one problem could use someone thing else i dont know what but lacks something
Depth, like everyone above said about 200 times...Quote:
Originally posted by interstella hitman@Aug 28 2005, 06:43 PM
very nice and abstract very good tear look throught out it only one problem could use someone thing else i dont know what but lacks something
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Looks great for a first, i'd keep trying C4D and getting better, because i'd love to see some more work come from you, like the text on it too, and the colours are cool too :D
That looks pretty cool. And anyone know where i can get 3DSM? My MSN is lost5000@hotmail.com, contact me if you know where i can get it or help me out.
The store. I bought mine.Quote:
Originally posted by Dante+Aug 27 2005, 10:30 AM-->:lol: actually, though thats true, I was going to say that I'd be able to help more if he used 3dsm.Quote:
Jack is going to say....
Use 3dsm because it's more proffesional, but c4d is more user-friendly.
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And anyone know where i can get 3DSM?
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As for the image, I find it to be way too random. This sort of abstract isn't good. Good abstract is planned abstract. Modifiers etc. are not the way to go. The presentation seems a bit too messy. Come up with a creative idea for your abstracts. Remember abstract does not = random. Abstract, though most of the time it doesn't show any concrete form, is not just aimless chaos. The render and the presentation need to be cleaner. Keep it up and we'll see about helping you get better at this.
I have a 3d abstract in the works, though I haven't found much time to work on it. I'll post it whenever I get around to finishing it.
