Through the Mist

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87...ughthemist.png

CnC plz

any help wit the text would be greatly appreciated

Edit: v2 added:

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y87...hthemistv2.png

sik. i like how the light is shinnin on his face

thx man! anymore?

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9...titled22jy.png

those parts need revising.. try achieveing a smooth overall flow.. the brushing is kinda obvious and disturbs the flow.. render needs to stand out more.. sharpen once?

focal point needs to be stronger.. fade the sides a bit?

don't worry about the text.. work on those 1st :)

damnit this is a really good signature if you look at it closly. The light source looks awsome. but you can see some faint rays of light which just added the best finishing touch.
nice work man.

^thx^

@Lumix: thx alot man great detailed crit there.

anymore?

Nice signature, and my suggestions are the same as Limus.

Overall I'll give it a 9/10. Still needs some work but keep going on it! I'm tired of how people just drop working on sigs after they post it!

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Originally posted by Lumix@Feb 18 2006, 12:39 AM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9...titled22jy.png

those parts need revising.. try achieveing a smooth overall flow.. the brushing is kinda obvious and disturbs the flow.. render needs to stand out more.. sharpen once?

focal point needs to be stronger.. fade the sides a bit?

don't worry about the text.. work on those 1st :)

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agreed with him

Quote:

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Originally posted by Lumix@Feb 18 2006, 12:39 AM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9...titled22jy.png

those parts need revising.. try achieveing a smooth overall flow.. the brushing is kinda obvious and disturbs the flow.. render needs to stand out more.. sharpen once?

focal point needs to be stronger.. fade the sides a bit?

don't worry about the text.. work on those 1st :)

[snapback]112906[/snapback]

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agreed with him

added v2 is it better or have i smoothed it to much?