Another new Spidey signature.

Hey guys. Followed the same tutorial as my previous signature but experimented a bit more with C4D's and lighting. I think this one has turned out a lot better than the last one. What do you guys think?
Outcome:
http://i40.tinypic.com/o0ov21.jpg
C&C please. :)

In all honesty, i dont see any lighting =/ sorry Other than that, your getting there, I think the thing you have to work on is negative space, you have good coloring going here with the red and blues, but you have way too much black negative space, try reading a tut on smudging, i think it would help out your sigs and style alot.

Keep up the good work ^^

Thanks for thr feedback. I know, I'm not very good on the whole smudging thing because I don't have a clue what I'm supposed to smudge! I will read up on some tutorials and post some more work later on. :)
P.S - Is the text okay? :D

the text could use a little bit of work its kind of dark and plain.

nice sig though yeah just work on filling the black!

Thanks for the comment. :) This is deffinantly one of my better signatures.

the text is on the right line, but the font you use, while looking basic, has to go with the sig, i dont like the font you used for your name, but other than that, its good

You are getting good at this :p The text could be worked on a little bit and like the others said the black needs to be filled in a little bit lol.. I love it though. Its better than mine lol :)

It's not better than yours. I'd really like to know how you got yours like you did because I just added loads of random C4D's and then whacked a render on top, made some new layers and overlayed them etc. Stop de-grading your work, that can drag you down in future work and there really isn't anything to de-grade it for.

I only have 1 C4D in it... 3 layers for the render ;) thats it :)

So? It's still turned out amazing. Mines got 3 C4D's in it, a total of 8 layers and yet it still needs improvements. Yours is close to perfect. It's just a learning step. :) We all get good at things after practice - even if it takes years.