Mario!...

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m.../mariocopy.png

epic empty spot on the right! fail! >.< well, anyways
I started doing ratchet's new tut.. got about 2 steps in and got sidetracked and made this... sorry ratchet :3 ill try again in a sec hahaha
C&C pwease... and I KNOW ABOUT THE EMPTY SPACE... jeeze... :D

v2:

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...ariocopy-2.png

idk, not much change... still can't get that black spot >.<

v3:

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...ariocopy-3.png

lol it looks like mario upper cutted a water balloon

could've just as easily said nothing... thank you for that wonderful C&C
not even a "good" or "crap, scrap it."

sry so far it does look very good for a unfinished work

I think that the effects are too blurred right now, they don't have much substance.
Try and possibly use some blur/smudge tooling on the background and add in a subtle colour just to give it an ounce of depth.
Watch that text, it's almost unreadable, just looks like a blob to me.

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Originally Posted by Ptka

I think that the effects are too blurred right now, they don't have much substance.
Try and possibly use some blur/smudge tooling on the background and add in a subtle colour just to give it an ounce of depth.
Watch that text, it's almost unreadable, just looks like a blob to me.

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Again, ptka has summated all my nitpicks.

Thanks ptka :D

v3:

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...ariocopy-3.png

Much better, but I didn't even notice that text existed until I strained my eyes.

text on this one is hard for me cause i dont want it to be a distraction, so its only there for those who see it.. not to be a focal of any kind
thanks for the C&C :D

I get your point, but when you have text that invisible it's almost better to have none at all.