Typography - Seek Freedom

Hey,
I hope you like this last artwork I've done.

inspiration, own comments and description in dA.

Link for image in full-size:
http://cr0z3r.deviantart.com/art/Seek-Freedom-129353336

Feedback please!

I like it. Its very nice.

wow good job man. but maybe try and make the text in more of the body shape. that might be me being a bit picky but w/e

Loving it :D nicee

Really good piece. Just my opinion, but maybe you should crop some of it out. The bottom and sides are empty, so it might look better if you crop them out.

Thanks everybody for your comments.
I really appreciate it.

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Originally Posted by Elramo

Really good piece. Just my opinion, but maybe you should crop some of it out. The bottom and sides are empty, so it might look better if you crop them out.

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I'm sorry, but what and where should get cropped? (background, the person.. ?)

Thanks again.

very nice man i love it maybe have the text follow his hands better other than that i love it :)

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Originally Posted by UnDeRoAtH

very nice man i love it maybe have the text follow his hands better other than that i love it :)

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yeah i know. thing is: i vectored the person (who's btw me, on a hill), and by doing that i gave it an inked style, which borders the shape of the vector in a unique way.

thanks though ;)

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Originally Posted by crozer

I'm sorry, but what and where should get cropped? (background, the person.. ?)

Thanks again.

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The whole thing needs cropping. Maybe just try making the canvas size smaller, could be a bit easier. Right now it's just got a lot of empty space on the sides and bottom which I don't think is working well.

Love it dude. Great job. Always have liked Typography, never understand how people can do it and have the patience with it. Your more Patient than i am mate = )