Haseo

Trying some new styles o.o , hope i can master them

http://i.imgur.com/RixZu.png
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http://i.imgur.com/39YlE.png
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Render: Link

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render part is nice
bg ruins it

it does? o.o

Too much white and less detail.

it is? D: , looked fine to me when i did it....hmmmp, guess i should try some stuff.

Any suggestions on how to fix?

I agree with timantia everything its kinda of ok but the bg sucks \:
still kiu

...instead of saying the bg sucks can you tell him how he could fix it? I think this the may goal about giving a CnC...imo

nice sig btw

why u putting them in here not in our sg lol they could be useful for battles but im liking this new style bro kiu :)
tho i have to agree this style bg doesn't really fit your render or focal used try another focal see how it works m8 but nice over all :)

It's going to take you heck load of time to master this style.