Rock 'n' Roll

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/4...ansmall7xb.jpg

Tools:
Pencils - 2H, 6B Softlead pencils.
Canoscan 5200 F scanner.
Photoshop CS.
My own imagination.

please comment and critique :)

For a first the right hand looks like it has 5 fingers, not counting the thumb. Secondly 2H is hard lead while anything b is soft. Also the left arm looks a little out of proportion on the lower part. And Lastly you need to work on your hands.

Overall I looks nice. I love that style.

http://www.MyOnlineImages.com/Member...mages/Twan.jpg
My colouration of the picture.
Btw nice drawned m8 ^^.

Still though the proportions are off and he still has 6 fingers. LOL. Looks better in color lol.

im gunna take a shot at colouring this one.
oh yeah, critique... i like pretty much everything cept the sleve on the right arm, his abnormal hands, and the guitar. why the guitar? because a telecaster is just so much more sexual.

EDIT: hey man, can i try colouring it?

hes not making a coloring book for all you guys.

anyway amazing work, the guitar is great and i see very to little if no flaws ecelent.
STOP COLORING his pictures lol

but.... i like to colour. i should have asked him first. wopes.

heres my attemp lolz

http://img298.imageshack.us/img298/6...attempt3xu.gif

He still has 6 fingers on one hand. And villain you should use ps for coloring not illustrator. Just doesn't turn out that well for stuff like this.

i actually used carola or what ever that is, i prinited it out and then scaned it back on lolz no joking

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Originally posted by MaDD@1 Hour Ago
hes not making a coloring book for all you guys.

anyway amazing work, the guitar is great and i see very to little if no flaws ecelent.
STOP COLORING his pictures lol

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I did the colouring becuase Twan wanted me to colour it :P.

oh lord, this is going to be a pain in the ass to reply =).

Okay, first of all, CrazyGamer, I love critique, THANK you!
First I want to say "LOL!", I actually didn't notice that misplaced finger, but I sure wasn't happy with any of the hands. Thanks again for noticing, and telling me. I weren't happy with that arm either, but now I see what's wrong. I can tell you that I've been too busy to notice anything of it, and I'm not sure that I'd ever do that, if you didn't comment it. Of course I will try to change it, and I'll do my best. My hands aren't really that bad, and I feel embarassed now that I look back at it, so I just have to do it =). I'll show you that I actually CAN draw good ^^. Oh, and about the pencils. I have a pack that says: Softlead pencils which contains 8B, 7B, 6B, 5B, 4B, 3B, 2B, B, HB, F, H, 2H. I am from Sweden, and I couldn't come up with the English word for them, so I just wrote what the box said. I'm sorry for the mistake, I'll edit it right away :D But I'll have to say that you really know your stuff, and since you do, it feels great that you didn't dislike anything more that what you mentioned. Do you draw? Thanks anyway!

Morphius: Looking good =)
I like it, specially the head; hair and eyes, although I'd choose another color for the guitar, and the difference between black and white on the pants looks a bit too strong. Oh, and one more thing, that may be my mistake, the thing you coloured white to the right of his leg, is actually a shadow, the same thing on the other leg that you colored black :D gj overall.

Undertone: Thank you for your comment :D
First of all. I aprecciate that you ASKED me if it was alright to color it, and I've been away all day (that's why I haven't replied yet). I have spoken to Twan, who actually owns this picture from now on, and yes, you may color it. About the guitar, He requested it, so I made him playing a guitar. It's as simple as that.

MaDD: Thank you!
Hah, that's kind of enoying actually, with people asuming they can color it. But since Undertone finally asked me kindly and Twan accepted it, it's alright, and Morphius got asked to do it, there's no problems. But Villian on the other side... Anyway, thanks for your comment, it means alot, I aprecciate it :D


Villian: I would highly aprecciate if you asked before taking my/twan's picture as if it was your own and color it! PLEASE. That's all I have to say, It just not nice.

Thank you all for commenting/giving me critique !!! :D

Your pic is totally awesome man, lovin it. Anyway, who cares about the finger mistake, should be easy to change. Thanks so much for drawing a pic of me. Keep up the great work buddy.

:)

ok.......did the others ask.. no?

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Morphius: Looking good =)
I like it, specially the head; hair and eyes, although I'd choose another color for the guitar, and the difference between black and white on the pants looks a bit too strong. Oh, and one more thing, that may be my mistake, the thing you coloured white to the right of his leg, is actually a shadow, the same thing on the other leg that you colored black :D gj overall.

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Cheers m8 ^^.
Well about those misstakes its still my fourth serious colouring so it is easaly that I make a misstake or two :).
But thanks for the Comment and critic about the colouring m8 B) B) B)

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im gunna take a shot at colouring this one.
oh yeah, critique... i like pretty much everything cept the sleve on the right arm, his abnormal hands, and the guitar. why the guitar? because a telecaster is just so much more sexual.

EDIT: hey man, can i try colouring it?

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I did the colouring becuase Twan wanted me to colour it :P.

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Villian: Yes they DID, both of them ^ try to read everything .



Twan, man thanks a lot, it was just fun doing this for you. And I&#39;m gonna improve it. :D no problem at all mate&#33;.

Morphius: yeah you&#39;re very good at it, specially for your 4th&#33;, I may have done about 6-8 pieces, and I&#39;m starting to get good at it now =D well good job to you to :D

enjoy :)

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/1373/twan4kt.jpg

ahhh crap, forgot to colour the wrist bands.

Man undertone that looks great. YOu made it look really good. Although i still can&#39;t get over those really odd proportions.

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enjoy :)

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/1373/twan4kt.jpg

ahhh crap, forgot to colour the wrist bands.

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Best colouring of the picture.

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/4...tesmall5yi.jpg

Here&#39;s the updated version&#33;

CrazyGamer, please stop commenting that. after the first time you said it I anwsered why and that I were going to fix it. Now you&#39;ve mentioned it at least three times, why? be patient&#33;

Sorry dude I didn&#39;t see your post for some reason. Also the reason I know so much is becus I used to draw quite a lot, I need to get back into it though, and I am going to start making my own manga soon. So if you want any good advice just pm me or something. Keep it up man.

Wow it looks much better now jerner. You draw those hands so good&#33;&#33; Also the wrinkles look realistic..

You&#39;ve got experiance in drawing ? Awsome&#33;
Oh I see, lol, I didn&#39;t think it was possible to miss that big reply, but I guess I was wrong :P . Sure I&#39;ll contact you if there&#39;s anything you want. Sweet.

randyrandy. thank yuo very much mate :D I&#39;m soon finished with the coloring of it. my OWN colored version.

http://img303.imageshack.us/img303/7...colored7bn.jpg

HERE IT IS..




please comment :)

awsome man, really like how the guitar turned out, and the hair looks excelent.

Yay 5 fingers&#33;

I always knew Twan was a special one&#33;

Can i try to color it? Its gona be horrible but i just wanna try it&#33;


I never saw that Vivi picture :(

Draw meeeeee&#33;

well some people are born with 6, so twan could of been a person with a extra figure, although i would find it odd to have 6fingers.. but nice i like the way it turned out.

i would find it a hell of alot easier to play if i had 6 fingers actually.

Wow that&#39;s awesome coloring Jerner&#33; Also the shading is really accurate. Nice shine effect on the hair, and glossiness of the ultra-Jenruitar&#33; How long did it take you to color that?

lmao 6fingers have ur 6th half way accross the keyboard

a 6th figer that strechs to 10feet

Nice job Jerner. Love the way you fixed it up and love the way you colored it. Keep it up man.

:) thank you all for posting :)

Undertone: woah, thank you very much man, great to hear. Thank you for commenting. Haha, I liked your colored version too :P

Oblivion: Haha, yeah he&#39;s special alright. Hmm.. I only let the ones that I like color it so... well, I have to let you color it, knock yourself out. I think Twan&#39;s alright with it. I&#39;m sure it won&#39;t be that bad =) About that Vivi picture.. I uploaded it long ago at Devart, didn&#39;t you notice it ? but I don&#39;t know if I&#39;ve posted it here though if that&#39;s what you mean? One more thing. I&#39;ve been working on coloring that Vivi for overall 10 hours at least, and still, I have his boots left to color. I just got tired coloring, I took a break, but now that I&#39;m done with this one, I&#39;m going straight to it again. Sorry if it took time, and, haven&#39;t you seen it yet ? not even at Deviantart? hahaha, you want me to draw you? It sure would be fun, but I&#39;m not sure I have the effort to give away yet another picture, but I&#39;ll think about it mate.
Villian: Haha yeah, I forgot to ask him if he actually had 6 fingers, maybe could be smart =D But then again, there&#39;s a much bigger chance that he has 5 fingers on each hand.. (That&#39;s why I actually drew 6 on one of them, lol). Thanks, I&#39;m glad you liked it =)

Randyrandy: thank you mate, I like the word awsome :) it sounds good in comments. The shadows. Yes, I worked on them for a while to get them all right, and I know that it all looks better when the shadows are correctly placed. I&#39;m not exactly sure about how long it took, but I know I worked with it for 5-6 hours ON and OFF.

CrazyGamer: Thanks, means alot, since you "hated" it so much before I remade the arms and hands/fingers ;) You have got to make something, or at least post something old here at GFXVoid, for me to see, I wanna see your skills man :D thx&#33;



This long reply got hosted to you0 by Jerner.

I&#39;ll comment on the latest version.
Very nice&#33; The fingers are alot better, not just that it&#39;s 5 fingers instead of 6, the fingers are this time in a realistic guitar-position. ;) You never put your fingers back like on the first version.
Uhm, I have no idea what it&#39;s called in English.. the.. uhm.. THIS:
http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/1...ored7bn7vd.jpg
Yeah, hehe. :P
The coloring on the arms make them look a bit flat, maybe take a look at that? The reflection in the hair could also need some work. Look at the reflections in this pic: http://pantransit.reptiles.org/images/1998...05/Warngirl.png
Ignore the ugly shadows the drawer also put there, just look at the lighting. Something like that could look good.
I have nothing else to critizise, good job&#33;

haha thanks man, yeah But have you ever thought about who is playing the guitar ? it&#39;s Twan, he&#39;s not that smart, he is holding the guitar upside-down and the neck is pointing to the wrong direction, but I know that you wanted to tell me anyway XP. I&#39;ll maybe change those things if I have time for it, for sure. Thank you very much mate&#33;

I see it i see it&#33; VIVI&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Can i color ol&#39; vivi&#33;

hey man, i play left handed, so that looks right too me :)

actually, i can play both left and right, im ambi-dexterious.

oh, and telecasters ftw.

um, lol OB, sure, just gimme credit for the sketch. Alright ?

oh btw jerner, its nice man the gibson sg looks nice i can see that u actually put the pickgaurd where its suppose to be and the coloring is pretty good looks just like a real SG keep up tha work m8

oops i messed up. the pickgaurd isnt suppose to be there. but atleast its the right shape&#33;

thanks Headshot :D I aprecciate your comment :D

i had to comment on this. i love playin guitar and bass. I mostly play bass (im better at it) so yunno like i said before tho nice work wish i could draw like that TEACH ME&#33;