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This is my first modelling attemp in cinema 4D, i wanted to start with something simple and build on it so i decided to create a futuristic fighter jet. anyway, ive worked on it for about 3 hours now, im going to add the jet engines and rockets later today but here is what ive came up with:
http://www.xtopic.net/uploads/@Burgy/WIP3.jpg
http://www.xtopic.net/uploads/@Burgy/WIP2.jpg
http://www.xtopic.net/uploads/@Burgy/WIP.jpg
any suggestions for improvement will be greatly appreciated :)
looks pretty heavy top fly with...
I like it! Pretty much too smooth for me, i like stealth fighters.
One thing i don't understand is, it reflects itself on the wings...How?
It's an overall good model but pretty much too smooth.
thanks for the comments, i think when i have finishes this i will start with a real stealth fighter and references
the gatlings can't fire ^^ cause theier tubes are stuck in the wings. extrude the polygon on the basement of the gatlings and that should be fine. polygon on the cockpit isn't right textured. lower the iterations of the hypernurbs it's definetly to high ^^
:) they are not intended to spin :P just fireill have a go with the hypernurbs now and GJ spotting that polygon lol
ive never done antything 3D except for mapping, so this is just from a point of view from some one who has no idea how hard that is.
they look like sharks.
apart from that, i saw a huge rocket jet on the back would look awsome.
you read my mind lol, yea that was what i was planning to do next.. i didn't realise how time consuming modelling is. I'm used to abstract renders :PQuote:
Originally posted by undertone@4 Hours Ago
a huge rocket jet on the back would look awsome.
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Modeling takes forever. Try using maya. Also it is way to smooth for that kind of design. Wings don't look like that unless you need extreme speed. The planes really don't even look all that fast. The guns on the wings should be just a tad bigger and you should put a mount on it. BTW gatlink guns do spin and having one bullet fire out of each at the same time is pretty much pointless to the extreme. But overall it is good for a first time model. Do better next time though.
Well, it IS his OWN creation, Im sure you wouldnt like other people telling you how to do your own thing. ;)Quote:
Originally posted by CrazyGamer@23 Minutes Ago
Modeling takes forever. Try using maya. Also it is way to smooth for that kind of design. Wings don't look like that unless you need extreme speed. The planes really don't even look all that fast. The guns on the wings should be just a tad bigger and you should put a mount on it. BTW gatlink guns do spin and having one bullet fire out of each at the same time is pretty much pointless to the extreme. But overall it is good for a first time model. Do better next time though.
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Annyway, Im really digging this. I only use Cinema4D for abstract stuff, havent really attempted anything model wise with it, I've found Maya to be a ton more user friendly IMO. I really like the material you used, any chance you could post the settings for material you used for the body?
Awesome work man, keep with it.
iiiiiiiiik :P take 3DSMQuote:
Try using maya.
yeah but he's right, a bit realism, even in scifi is necessesary ^^Quote:
Well, it IS his OWN creation, Im sure you wouldnt like other people telling you how to do your own thing. wink.gif
3DSM? Noooo, that is not at all user friendly, despite it's strength, Maya is better :PQuote:
Originally posted by Hazardous_Material@6 Hours Ago
iiiiiiiiik :P take 3DSM
yeah but he's right, a bit realism, even in scifi is necessesary ^^
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And I wouldnt say you NEED realism.. That is what makes the imagination so great, realism doesnt have to be apart of it, it that were true.. then I would think creativity would be limited, despite how big the limit truely is.
Yeah but how far can you go until you make something that nobody will realize wtf it is. Then what have you acclomplished. Making something that confuses people.
Isnt apart of art, graphic or fine, making people think?
You have a point, but you're not seeing mine. Oh well. I am not getting into this anymore.
I use maya.. pretty hard in the beginning.
I didn't really get those 3D texture placements. :blink:
Btw,
Art is a Freeform.
Oh I do see what you are saying, dont get me wrong, I understand and everything, I just dont agreeQuote:
Originally posted by CrazyGamer@11 Hours Ago
You have a point, but you're not seeing mine. Oh well. I am not getting into this anymore.
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when i look on that i say wow
thats rly nice
thanks for all the comments, ive scraped this idea now im working on a wallpaper
