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Very nice piece here. The left side of the pic has a "soft" feel to it. Maybe you should give the render a softer feel too. Maybe blur it out a bit or give it a bit of a glow.
Wow nice render :P Anywys one thing that I dont really like is the squares. It seems so bright..maybe give it a little blur?
Overall it's brilliant, great font and the design on the right ;)
MOFG This is one of the best I have ever seen. I love the brushing, the text, the quality of the render, I love everything. The only thing that can be improved is the masking job on the hair on the black side. It just looks to bright for the black bg. But otherwise this looks fantastic.
i like it, but some parts of that render look like they werent cut out that well, theres a little lighter edge around some parts of it. the suqares look cool, and the brushing is nice. i like the text, nice simple effect.
mofg lol...
zomg pwnz mofg.
w00t random
but to the piece
love it, everythings good(not perfect :P)
the squares are a good idea and they look just right.
randy: they are blurred lol.. motion blur at 50 pixels and 20, 2 times each, what more blur do you want lol?
and about the render, personally i think it's cropped perfectly, not because i did it, cuz i didn't i got it out of a 1600+ render pack and it was saved on a transparent bg so it has nothing to do with my erasing the lime green bg or black bg lol, and all the other renders i have in the pack are cropped perfectly as well... i can show you the pic if you like sometime... yes this was a simple effect lol, but every1 seemed to love it at least... i didn't think any1 would cuz i didn't do much
I know you didnt do much, (i know that render by heart lol), but it still looks pretty sweet.
The coloring is what nailed the piece, good job.
YES!!!! I think chemical's multicoloring is my all time fav on these forums, i'm so glad to see it back. I've seen that render billions of times, but never that size or presented the way you did. Really, really nice job on this one...keep up the good work.
thanks a lot guys lol... and i thought you probably preferred desititan's coloring
i like them both, because both of you really have different styles of art. Desi's is alot more contrasted, while yours is really ambient, and the ambience is what works very well for this peice.
OH ok Chemical, I suggest doing gaussin blue... =|
If you mean the motion blur and then screen, i don't think it's good for this one. The render's detailed, and yet the ambience from the coloring gives it a soft, almost velvety texture. This is great how it is, i'd leave it untouched.
I like it, just one bad critism: The square things does not look like pixels nor other computer stuff... But keep working on it
i never said it had to look like computer wires or technology... i just made it look like he is breaking away from the grid stuff on his left arm
It looks awesome dude. Nice work. I love how you have the left side, with the 3 colors. Keep up the good work!
Sexy~ Can't really find anything you could improve. :P
thanks for all the comments all... and btw xtremerunnars... sorry but you are wrong... nothing was set to screen... i never use screen anymore... only lighten, overlay, and the occasional multiply
Ah, i didn't mean to you....i think cg said make something gaussian blue, i interpreted it as a typo where i thuoght he meant blur then setting it to screen for the "dreamy" effect.
Looks like we all misinterpreted each other lol.
Hope to see more work like this soon!
this is basically a render.. some brushing and a few colour and contrast changes nothing too special ... it doesn't impress me much compared to what i have seen
and so is 90% of the sigs that are made and posted on these forums, and yet you do not complain about them. i think it looks good no matter how it was made. Again, lets say The Mona Lisa (spelling might be wrong) was actually a photograph, would it be any less stunning?
The more i look at it, the more i hate that font... what is it?
It's a good piece for wallpapers and such, and the tech-webbings/cells would be nicer if it was smoother on the left, it is very contrasting to the dark bg, maybe lowering the opacity might help some. Just my thought anyway.
Nice manip.
fooking amazing very nicely done looks like youve taken a lot of care with it. personally i think the render could be blended in a bit and the left side is maybe a bit bright but other wise spot on. GJ :D
