finalfantasy everlasting

http://pix7.com/0805/13843w_finalfantasyeverlasting.jpg
aight c&c please

current?

I like it but im not sure about the text... it could be positioned better imo. The blending on the render needs some work but overall its pretty good :) well done :D

Its allright. everythings ok but theres still nothing that makes it _your_ sig.

More color, capitalize the "F", and straighten out the everlasting text. :D Nice work otherwise.

more comments please.. 5 hours since last post is a little high...

Well maybe they don't wanna respond to certain ones..........

I think it needs just a little touch of another colour or something to go in there. Your current is better though.

i dont like the tounge...... blah!

rofl part of the render... dont think i coulda changed that lol

nice colors but i dont like the shape overlpping the face... it might be a good current but i like the grungy feel of urz atm

wow you have reallly made good work of it..
i like the background well....
GJ :lol:

I suggest adding a very very light color, or maybe you did (orange)?

Also, I don't like the text. It just feels like it's pasted.

BTW on (tidus?) neck, there is some black stuff. Dunno if that's a brush or part of the render.

I think the render looks ok, I personally don't like the text positioning.