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I drawed this picture last year, can't remember exactly when, but here it is. I thought it would be fun to know what you think about it, since it's kind of old and all. Well, don't know what to say more than that, so, comment and critizise it please!
looks pretty cool, i jst don understand why is his body black, its suppose to be shading?
btw: maybe work on leg
yes he is black, because there isn't any lightsource around him, or at least not infront of him. The light comes from the right of him. Do you think it looks bad ? I think it looks kind of nice, it gives a nice effect. What do you mean "maybe you should work on the leg" ? please be more specific
i dunno the bottom of leg looks flat to me.....
i really dont know but i dont liek it too much how its dark, if theres no light source the bacgkround shoulde be black then too, or :unsure: i dunno...?
As I mentioned earlier, the actual art is good (as usual). However, what I'd reckon is rather 'ugly'/malplaced is the whole darkness-deal you are going with. Sure, even if the intension was for the orch (or whatever the ugly soab is) to be in silhouette, I'd say that it would look better if you just didn't keep it all black, instead add minor details of light within all that black: the light from the sun is reflected more than we think. You should know all this from our biology lessons ^^
Well well... Update, scan and I'd love to see a colouring of this one!
Keep it up, dude.
Sigh, I didn't want to make the background black, I that'd make the whole picture look dead and waay to dark. Which leg are you talking about?
Dompa. Thank you. What's with everyone disliking the darkness in the picture? why couldn't he be dark ? and who said the sun is shining on him? I said a lightsource, it could be anything, a huge spotligt or something, that concentrates the light on one spot. This is a drawed character, there are no such thing as an orch in real life, which actually makes this piece unrealistic, and the shadow doesn't have to be 100% correct. I think it looks good, and that's the way I see it. =)
You think everything you do looks good, smartass ^^
I'm just going for realism, dude. Without a serious matter and influence, a fantasy can't be neither generated nor sealed into someones mind (deep shit). And who said there are no such things as orchs? :D
Ha, now when I look at it - all previous comments does sound a bit racist ;)
Well, well.. I'm right, and you are wrong. You should listen to feedback, chuckey ^^.
First of all. I do not think everything I make looks good, not at all. Don't say that.
Well, this isn't a realistic picture, it's a drawing of an ugly thing called Bert, and he is not real, I know that, couse I made him up. You think the character is too dark right ? There is nothing I can do about it now, and, as I said, I wanted to try it out. Yes, it's good that you crtizise it, and that you tell me what's wrong with it, but why don't you tell me what's good about it too ? I would like to know that too, I think I deserve both positive and negative critique.
Translated from swedish to english btw ^^. Well well, I'd reckon this should help you remember, you old senile @#¤%!Quote:
Originally posted by Dompa+45 Minutes Ago--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Dompa @ 45 Minutes Ago)</div>Lol, you already forgot what I told you on MSN? Well, here it is for public spectation ^^.Quote:
As I mentioned earlier, the actual art is good (as usual).
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Jerner says:
http://forums.gfxvoid.com/t-13209.htm
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wtf haven't i seen that sketch somewhere?
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the actual outlining was very good, as on most of your art. But the interior is too dark (even if it was you intention for it to appear as dark - it is really TOO dark).
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I like it but it's just too black. You should take off some of the black so you can see detail. Even if theirs no light, at least make some brightness..the other parts of his body has light..
Dont listen to them. I like it alot. I dont anything wrong at all with the lighting. A little more detial would be nice, but i like it mate.
maybe lighten up that block of black in the body and the left foot is a little misshapen, nice though :D
thank you all for commenting you guys, I do appreciate it! Thanks
i like the darkness of the pic ..it adds to the overall menace
I love the darkness, i think it fits with the orc's personality and character, if that was intended. The right leg ( non black one ) seems a bit mangled. Draw a bandage and it'd be a good add to the character i think. Some colour would look ace on this, very light though... as in, not much applied, because there is not alot of room it would overpower the image i think. Ace work, love it =D
Did you get a scanner in the end then =) Or a super digi cam
I love the armour man LD very detailt
RAb B)
Thank you mate! nice to see you back here! I'm glad someone liked my idea, haha. It was intended, and I know it looks a bit odd, but I don't think I'll change anything at this point. I have a lot of other things to do. Maybe I'll color this one quick, just to see if it makes it look better, thank you!Quote:
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i like the darkness of the pic ..it adds to the overall menace
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I love the darkness, i think it fits with the orc's personality and character, if that was intended. The right leg ( non black one ) seems a bit mangled. Draw a bandage and it'd be a good add to the character i think. Some colour would look ace on this, very light though... as in, not much applied, because there is not alot of room it would overpower the image i think. Ace work, love it =D
Did you get a scanner in the end then =) Or a super digi cam
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Yes I did! a cannon canoscan, it's sweet and I love it!
No super digi cam though :/...
Oh well.. all in good time. nice dude. Good to see you ( on here ) aswell,
The ultimate darkness looks kind of strange, but the rest is awesome!
I love the detail and realilisticness you used!
Very scary looking :unsure: (grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :o ) :D
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This is only my opinion, but i think you should draw what the currently all black space would look like normally (not with any particular light sourse)
Then shade it really dark, but light enough to see details
I dont know if you would be able to do that, but i think it would help
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And once again:
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! :lol:
GJ! I love it!
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The ultimate darkness looks kind of strange, but the rest is awesome!
I love the detail and realilisticness you used!
Very scary looking* :unsure:* (grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr* :o )* :D
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This is only my opinion, but i think you should draw what the currently all black space would look like normally (not with any particular light sourse)
Then shade it really dark, but light enough to see details
I dont know if you would be able to do that, but i think it would help
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And once again:
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!* :lol:
GJ! I love it!
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Face it dude, the chick makes a good point! :lol:
Oh well, I want you to make a few more sketches for us all to criticize ^^!
hey jerner, i think everything you draw looks good. lol
I cant see this pic and im pretty sure you didnt send it to me... yet, git on it! lol
anyway, ill critique when i can see it.
I like the teeth and the helmet the most! Very nice job! :lol:
