mmm 3d abstract <3 :D , my 1st ever render from cinema is there :) hope you all like it :)
http://dick.derkan.net/wingsoffreedom.jpg
Wallpaper version avalaible on DA.
and some comments on dA on this piece :lol: are greatly aprecciated too :)
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mmm 3d abstract <3 :D , my 1st ever render from cinema is there :) hope you all like it :)
http://dick.derkan.net/wingsoffreedom.jpg
Wallpaper version avalaible on DA.
and some comments on dA on this piece :lol: are greatly aprecciated too :)
Awsome :lol:
Can you write a tutorial 'bout it?
It's some kind of outer space explosion or something :blink:
GJ!
Lose the tech brushing and i like it.
Commented on your DA. :)
nice but i agree, too much white, and lose the tech :)
I'd get rid of the soughta overlayed cloud effect, you should know what i mean, its really noticable up the top & bottome left... Anyway the clouds really destroy the rushing explosion hapening in the middle... or you could keep it & run a radial blur on zoom at 100% through it twice, that'll look sweet :)
The text brushing I'd get rid of around the the title & I'd keep one of the horizontal or vertical ones & run it to the edge & that'd look better than them meeting in the corner...
Good job on the render though :)
there's to much white in the explosion, but overall very nice job!!!! ;)
i know about the clouds, ype now i can see that it looks kinda strange, but ill next time get rid of it, or use the radial blur, what i didnt in this case.... :) and on the tech brushing how i said it was my 1st ever, so i must get some experience with it , you know what i mean :) . anyway thx for comment .Quote:
Originally posted by Vermilion+23 Hours Ago--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Vermilion @ 23 Hours Ago)</div>yep ok , next time ill do ;) thx for commentQuote:
Lose the tech brushing and i like it.
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w000t rob commented my work :D yep agree with tech brushing, its just trendwhore on 3D abstracts, and it was my 1st tech brushing, thx for comment :)Quote:
Originally posted by rob@17 Hours Ago
nice but i agree, too much white, and lose the tech :)
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I'd get rid of the soughta overlayed cloud effect, you should know what i mean, its really noticable up the top & bottome left... Anyway the clouds really destroy the rushing explosion hapening in the middle... or you could keep it & run a radial blur on zoom at 100% through it twice, that'll look sweet :)
The text brushing I'd get rid of around the the title & I'd keep one of the horizontal or vertical ones & run it to the edge & that'd look better than them meeting in the corner...
Good job on the render though :)
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and thx for comments to all of you and im glad that you like it :)
The brushing isn't that good but keep practicing, it'll get better, there's too much white. Also the text is quite bad, choose a different font and different blending.
The C4D render looks ok. It's ok, but you need practice. :)
Hmm...
Tip: Multicolor it with different blue colors...Might look nice :)
tech, brushing, and bg all need a lot of work. Render isn't that great either. I suggest starting another piece instead of trying to fix this one.
and i agree cause i never edit old work im too lazy :DQuote:
Originally posted by Illegalx17@14 Hours Ago
tech, brushing, and bg all need a lot of work.* Render isn't that great either.* I suggest starting another piece instead of trying to fix this one.
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