My Card

hi guys,
C&C please.
not for professional. use, just for fun but dont let that spoil your usefull tips :)

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/900/kaartje0ca.jpg

Its very empty and dark, Change the text to a lighter colouro r maybe add a small white outer glow.
Put something in the BG like maybe a very faint gradient.
How long did it take like 4mins? If it was for a business or something it wouldn't get a lot of attention but theres not a lot of things wrong with it just not a lot of things right with it either.

it took like 5 mins to make indeed, took a bit longer to come up with though. i want to keep it simple but not boring, guess its to boring. dont want to make a busy card with thingy's and such in it. ill try to change the txt color and add a glow and see what that does, thanks for comment

Yeah it might be because the sun is shining on my screen why it looks so dark.

maybe, it is quite dark but not extreemly in my eyes. maybe someone else could comment on the darkness just to be sure. anyway i added some minor changes:

http://img494.imageshack.us/img494/8454/kaartje2sx.jpg

Definatly better maybe the outer glow was a bit too much not sure.

I really like the way you joined the h up to i, thats nice :P

haha i like the outer glow. on the doodle on the left. not to sure on the glow on the text.

the thing which connects the 'h' t the 'i' doesnt align properly so i would fix that and mabey change the background but apart from the h and the i thing it looks alright

yeah i noticed that and fixed it.. and i distorted it a bit.
i think it looks cool but might be a bit to..out of place i guess

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/1814/kaartje2cu.jpg

You should do an outline of a table, now that it's sideways it looks like it should be laying on a table.

good point, will do
thanks,

any more comments?

someone deleted my post? i added something else and its gone :S
turn the outer glow on the text white and down to a pixel or two and should be done for me :D

i think this design looks alot better than your first one

Maybe put a website or some contact info on it.

yes i am going to put the contact info on the back, to keep the front nice and slick :)

think the outer glow is white but it justs doesn't look like it, but i will see wha i can do, thanks for the comments guys!

hope te get them printed next week

ooh and also what would look good is like an underlying line to accentuate the contact text a little with an outerglow

not sure i understand what you mean? could u be a bit more specific?

thanks

well like, you know if you do a line under the text in the same direction it's going now.. like an underline but make that with an outerglow aswell as the text :)

hehe so just an underlined text with an outerglow, ok i will post it and see if that is what you mean, thanks for comment