Design is Sport

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11-03-2005, 01:14 PM
natso

so guys, what do you think?

i think its pretty good but it does need some work and i dont know how to improve it.. im having struggles with the colors, i think it looks a but to alike but my other side likes it that way... any comments?

http://img281.imageshack.us/img281/3...issport9bc.jpg
11-03-2005, 03:03 PM
Dutch-Soldier(nl)

i like the idea and the waves on the background. But i don't like the text, try to fix that..but nice job!!

Greetz

D-S(nl)
11-03-2005, 03:04 PM
natso

the text or the font? well see i like this font but its not one of those fonts you can easily use but i really wanted to :P:P

thanks
11-03-2005, 03:09 PM
Dutch-Soldier(nl)

lol I meant the font ;)
11-03-2005, 03:15 PM
natso

k i will change it, see if it looks good. thanks for comment!
11-03-2005, 04:09 PM
Ragidy_man

m...
its nice but the righthand side looks to much like the ipod advert with eminem in it
not that i think u copied it but its just, i dont like that advert
11-04-2005, 01:52 AM
natso

mmm never saw that advertisment...
thanks though :)

(eminem in ipod? didn't he just sue apple???)
11-04-2005, 09:54 PM
ZeKayeM

haha it looks like a black guy from the 70's runnin from the cops
11-04-2005, 10:15 PM
Oblivion

I like it cept the font...Its to grungy to be ina vector.
11-05-2005, 03:30 AM
natso

lol
nice imagination :P i can understand the black guy (afro..?) but the cops :P?

is there anyone else that dislikes the font? cuz i would like more then one opinion before i permenatly change it :)

thanks

edit: srry oblivion, didn't see ur comment, i will change the font know:D
11-05-2005, 06:39 AM
natso

Ok font changed and i added a minor distort to the text
better?

http://img453.imageshack.us/img453/1...issport0gw.jpg
11-05-2005, 07:14 AM
Dick

i think much better than 1st version , but text looks to me bit popin out of rest of image, i would try to blend it somhow
11-05-2005, 07:17 AM
natso

thanks for comment dick, but it was kind of the meaning that the text stood out of the rest but i see what you mean and i agree it wojuld lok better if it blended in.

http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/4...issport5rz.jpg

but a blur behind it that lets it come out a bit less..
11-05-2005, 03:38 PM
masokist

i really like the colors, butim too sure about the waves in the bg, just doesnt seem to fit to me. otherwise great job. looks good. maybe add a few more splats or something though.
11-05-2005, 04:09 PM
Dick

god now it looks fantastic, maybe one more thing: try to go to free transform >perspectvie on the text and play with it a bit :)
11-06-2005, 06:23 AM
natso

ok will do, im happy with it now :D:D
11-06-2005, 08:48 AM
natso

thank you:) i added a perspective to it and it does look good,
this project is finished now and i decided to make a series of "design is sport"

so more to come:D thanks for comments and critique guys!!

Final:
<a href=\'http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/5182/designissport5gx.jpg\' target=\'_blank\'>http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/5182/designissport5gx.jpg</a>
11-06-2005, 09:18 AM
Dick

yeeeeeeeah almost perfect :) great job natso !
11-06-2005, 11:13 AM
natso

yes i do see myself improving and am very happy about it :D
already working on my second "design is sport"