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as i said in my previous piece; i am going to make an Design is Sport series.
i made part 2 and it took me for ever seen that everything i tried adding to it just.
it does look a bit empty but somehow i like it that way.. anyway.. please tell me what you think..
dont just take a look and walk away:P
http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/9...ssport22bt.jpg
Its a bit choppy around the board. Also the border should cut off the end of the surfboard where it crosses...Overall i like it though...The blue and purple contrast alot which looks nice.
fixed the board... working on the boarder..:) thanks for comment
k fixed boarder/board
and replaced the second surfer to just behind the first one..
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6...ssport24er.jpg
Looks a lot better man, good job. Just the front of the board needs to be rounded off, and then it'll be ace.
Nice man! I like it...Especially the hair of the surf guy!
thanks!
round the board off? mm ok
glad you guys like it:)
yeah the hair turned out pretty good:)
put some ocean waves with low opacity
http://www.noaanews.noaa.gov/stories2005/i...ave-warning.jpg
something like those. except those look like flames.
its too empty right now. imo.
gj.
i didnt comment on the part 1 but i saw it and really liked it.
mm it is empty i agree but i think it looks good that way.. but i will think about the waves you showed me.. i was personally thinknig about waves in thact exact same vector style but i dont think they will fit in this type of artpiece.. maybe someone else could comment on that?
edit: didn't think about the low opacity, maybe it will look good, i will deffinitly try it!
i like it now but i think you should work on another similar piece with the same surferbut with some waves and a beach. but i woudlnt make waves like that.
mm okay, ill keep that idea in mind,
thanks
empty space on right which i personally hate, then i dont like font and at all the text "design is" and i would put some effect on "sport" maybe try again some perspective changes and some shitz with text, otherwise it looks pretty nice , if you woul add those waves as DE said, and make something with text it would rox imo :) i really like that girl with board :) maybe( dunno) just try how it will look , add 1px stroke on the surf
hey dick, ur the only one that can actually see that the surfer is a girl. everyone thought it was a guy :P
ok, fine :P ill add the waves tomorro:D
I actually thought it was a girl too... not just because you can see her breast, but because i just imagined her in a pink shirt....
okido, i have been a bit busy so i havn't really had time for personal design but i kind of finished it, tell me what you think?
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/9...ssport23ux.jpg
it would be better if the last wave went right up to the top, or if not, then it should stay in the bottom half of the picture....also the "sport" font doesn't looke like it fits in with this one, but still nice :)
hmm i see what you mean with the wave, dont see your point with the sport font though... ill see what it looks like when it changed
Yeah the sport font kind of looks out of place, but other than that this is a nice piece man, good job.
okidoki, guess if more then one person says so its probably so, ill change the font :D
thanks for the comment guys :) hope i will have more time for personal designs next week :)!!
i said it be4 change it!
haha ok guess you were right, tried adding some sort of perspective but that looks like shit, thanks for comments all!
I like the waves. Except i think they should roll from right to left, so they go with her and not make it look like a tsunami is coming to get her.
good point, im on it:) i just did it on the right cuz the right side was so empty
ok im done with this part...
Final Result
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/9...ssport28du.jpg
