Havn't made a piece in a while. I wanted to do a lot with this piece, but I don't know if I did enough.
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Havn't made a piece in a while. I wanted to do a lot with this piece, but I don't know if I did enough.
Original Version
Smaller Version
Hope you like. Please give comments.
EDIT: Updated Version
I like it. The render has the outward explosion effect, that's pretty nice.
The techish stuff on the side could be moved over to the edge though.
good job.
Thx for the comment. I was on the phone with my friend and he was kind of saying the same thing. I was thinking of taking out some of the tech effects.
i'd take out the text effect if i was you cos i dont see what their there for but they look alright
do you mean the tech effects?Quote:
Originally posted by Tetsuo@7 Minutes Ago
i'd take out the text effect if i was you cos i dont see what their there for but they look alright
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its good. i like it, the colors are great, but maybe not so much dead black space. maybe fill it with some subtle brushes possibly, nothing major, but just the subtle differences that make a piece.
Yea I was kinda thinking of lowering the amount of tech effects on the left. They kind of look too heavy and out of place. But if I were to add a few subtle effects, what can I add? Can you give me a few examples so I can get an idea? Please. Thx for the comment.
my thinking there, is just some more *bang* and kinda the cloudy stuff that goes well with abstract renders and such like that. nothing major and not covering the main attraction, but some to fill up dead space. it looks good as it is now, but there isnt enought to really make your eye wander around looking for the subtleties, wondering what else is there (if that made sense). even just some simple tech brushes, on their own layer with a LOW LOW opacity.
i like the tech on the left though, i like the repeating of the main, that looks good. maybe move it to the right a couple pixels to help fill space.
those are my thoughts at least.
I think I get what you mean. Thx alot. I'll try to fix up some of the stuff.
More Comments please. I'd like to get some more of views and thoughts on this.
^^ glad i could be of some help. it may not work out like i am thinking in my head, but those are just my thoughts. thanks for 'listening' to them (kinda cant listen through the computer usually :P )
Tech is too blurry, like the text colouring effects, maybe a render should be put on top that will make it much better. Something organic you need.
oh, another thought, just occured, maybe make a fractal to overlay on top of it. a nice round and 'bursty' (for lack of a better word, or a word for that matter) looking one maybe.
I'll keep that in mind. Seems like it might work out. Where do you think I should place the fractal?
I'll work on it tomorrow. For now, I'll be going to sleep.
Nice...I would use it as a background if it was the right size (and if my computer can handle it :lol:)
And I like the tech thingy on the left...
~Nice job!
Updated
I took out the heavy tech effects and the blurryness of them. I also lowered the opacity on them by 10 %. To fill up most of the empty space, I brushed over the piece and used radial blur.
Please comment on the update.
WOW! Looks much better...! :)
I resized it and used it as my background image...I like it a lot!
Thx man. I'm glad you're using it as a bg.
My next plan is to make maso a gift for helping me out lol.
definatley better than the original and the other one
thanks buddy =DQuote:
Originally posted by HostilePenguin@3 Hours Ago
Thx man. I'm glad you're using it as a bg.
My next plan is to make maso a gift for helping me out lol.
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some more suggetions though, i dont know if you are done yet or not.
- maybe move the 'mirror' of the main focus, or lower the opac
- i still a fractal would go well over the very top/center of it, if done right. a very low opac, maybe even set it on soft light or screen. and a nice kinda soft/spikey render, if that makes sense.
- maybe lower opac of the brushing on top of the main render.
the new one is DEF an improvement, i like it a lot. a very good job.
wow nice piece! yea alittle too techy, and the text... argg..dont really like it - try to fix that- other than that i like it - love all the colors!
