Mousehunter

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/1...hunter17xe.jpg

pretty self explanatory on there but i'll copy/paste what i got on my deviantart:


MouseHunter Version 1.0 (non textured)

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created in cinema 4D XL 7.2
logo was made in photoshop 7.0
about 5-6 hours modeling

the name came from when modeling it, two "ears" were somehow added on its main turret
i ended up removing the ears but kept the name and added hunter, maybe i'll make a smaller one and name it the original "mouse"


so far its not textured

texturing it will make a world of a difference

any C+C on things i should add / change before i do the dirty stuff?

bloody hell you have way too much on your hands... looks awsome & all that just for hunting mice...

That's pretty sick dude, you're good at 3D. I'd say give it a camo texture or something.

Other than that I don't really think you should change anything. Maybe make more ridges on the tracks...the things that move the tank instead of tires...I don't know what they're called.

one word
well a few
OH MY FU***** GOD!! great job!!!!
I dont know anytying about C4D so i dont know how hard/easy that is but it looks like it takes a lot of time/skill.

man that looks sick but a few things ive noticed...

On the logo the mouses eye is above the red circle thing...
and the buildings and tanks look like they made of chrome lol other than that i FxCKING love it!

thanks for the input


hxck- i should add more polys to the tracks/treds ill work on that thanks for pointing it out

ben- the mouse logo does look weird but its because i enlarged it a lot. when i minimize and had the eye under the Red it didn't stand out , looked like a one eye mouse so i had to make it over the red line ;D

oh and its all "chrome" because there is no texture to it yet


i'll keep you guys updated

i gotta Uv map it now.

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Very nice! I suggest making it sharper on the edges, most tanks aren't rounded off ;)

Good work!

sweet!

all it needs is a cat logo on the side of the tank and it will be ready to go!

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I lvoe it! and I agree about the cat logo on the side of the tank

thanks thanks


the cat logo idea is a good one ;) it'll be in a different version though then the final snaps


i'll do 3 snaps of the finished textured tommarow and a final scene that i'll spend the most time tommarow. :huh:

looks incredible, but it is a little to smooth for me. tank and smooth doesnt seem to go together to me. :P

There are too many curved areas, but I think you're doing a great job so far. It'll be a while till I can get as good as you.

wow looks pretty good cant wait to see it textured :)

its actually version 2.5
version 2 = remodeled, i made it more square less rounded and dropped the nurbs to make it more "tank-like"
then i textured it
pretty simple texturing , a city/metal theme to it.

im planning on two more skins to it
Camo (jungle)
and a specialized Cheetah Version, with a new logo ;D

for more info/updates check my gallery. (in sig)

http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/1338/mh25mh.jpg

Wow man, huge improvement. The treads look a hell of a lot better, nice job.

thanks

A lot of the curves look like they went away. Job well done man.

thanks

i took your guys suggestion

Somehow, i think that would fuck up a mouse...

I love it. Never seen a tank befor modeled in C4D.

camo version:

http://img449.imageshack.us/img449/6938/mhcamo7yd.jpg


last version to come will be the cheetah version
with new cheetah logo and a tweaked model

your c4d renders atound me.

Hey man your c4d skills rock, you any good at abstract?

Very nice man, even better than the revamped version. I love the texture, it's nice and smooth. Good job, looking forward to the next outcome.

Meh, I dont like that texture. Its quite ugly imo. I like the model alot.

I think you went to high tech on the whole thing. Make it simpiler.

nah i dont like the texture tbh, it looks like a frilly tablecloth thing, sorry...you have skill though

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yes i&#39;m quite good with abstract models but i haven&#39;t made any peices that are much time consuming

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Meh, I dont like that texture. Its quite ugly imo. I like the model alot.

I think you went to high tech on the whole thing. Make it simpiler.

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the camo texture? oh and i wasn&#39;t planning on the outcome of the name it kinda just popped into my head after messing around with the model. if i was making an actual mousehunter it&#39;d be simpler ;)

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nah i dont like the texture tbh, it looks like a frilly tablecloth thing, sorry...you have skill though

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the camo texture? or both? ;)



for everyone else thanks for the wonderful comments, stay in tuned the last will appear hopefully tonight.

I&#39;d like to collab with you some time, if your up for it.

the last of the the mousehunters
version 3.5 remodeled 1 more cannon set
version 4 cheetah texture along with the new cheetah logo ;D

i&#39;m done with them , if anything i&#39;ll put them all in 1 view for ease instead of looking at 3 seperate peices

other things caught up so dont expect a scene , yet.
after i get some stuff out of the way i&#39;m planning on making a small "mouse" tank.
:rolleyes:

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/2127/mh34wt.jpg

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sure , but i&#39;m currently working on a template , once i finish that we&#39;ll have to hook up. :D

ww dood nice job , come out well , id just knock the white out in the army one

I dont like any of the textures, tbh.

They all seem to ruin the model.