Fierce Visions

Not sure if im progressing or declining....

What u think?

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/4...evision3ij.jpg

the text is awful once again... it looks like you tried to do something wierd with the render, I think in this case you shoulda left it alone... I like the brushing on it though

I don't think the text goes to well with the picture. It looks like the render was blended into the image, I think it would do better if it stood out a little more. I love the beckground I think you did really well on that. Good job over all.

im having to agree that text just doesnt work dunno maybe u should create a custom fire text img and plant it into the fire of the bg ?

How would i make the text look like fire, stuff like that, like what tool

To make text on fire:


Duplicate your text layer, and with you top text layer colour balance to look like flames (dark oranges with a little lighter in the middle is a nice combination)
Then gaussian blur the top layer to 1 - 3 and then use a 50% - 60% strenth smudge tool to define the flames if you want to can duplicate the original text layer to as mant times and do the process again to use variations in colour and maybe to help make your flames more full :)

.. that's how i would do it, just thought of it, hope it helps :D

what you've done with the render looks pretty cool but the text is awful

I actually really like the render and the background. Only thing is the text that bothers me.
I'd go with a really decent and clean font and maybe put it to soft light with a shadow.

The text is too noisy and big. Lower the opacity and size and put it in the corner, and then it'll be ace.

thanks everyone for their comments

yeah i luv the work u've put in on the render looks great m8 gw