POETRY BATTLE!

Well, in response to an assignment by my english teacher, i want to have a poetry battle.

We'll have five entrants, including me, and the poem should be around three stanzas. Four is ok, but don't make it too long.


Theme: Any! (don't pick something dumb though, this is serious)


I will do my best to get something down, and i encourage you all to also.
Rhyme scheme doesn't matter.




I'm supposed to read a poem for english, and i'll probably read mine, but if the winner wouldn't mind, i'd love to read theirs! Credit will be given.


Entrants:
1. XtremeRunnerARS
2. Shurai
3. BFG
4. Hxck
5. Masokist



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kay ;)

Hell Yeah!

Never thought about making a battle. =D


Here's mine. The title is "Dedicated to Sp0rk"

We need all these people in our lives, filling these notions.

When Im gone, I feel like these people dont exist.


Why must I, a worthless soul, be feeling these emotions?

Weekly, im writing this one poem, making these lists.


While my lists are wrote, I'm feeling horrible, making fists.

When drawing, writing, and modelling, I spill the feelings.


While you carry on, waking each day remember me.

Remember my art, experinces, love, and healings.


Weekly, In my frame of mind, I'm fleeing.

Weening myself these absurd feelings.


Weighing down my heart, smiling back.

Wednsday, you all will know what I lacked.

I'll enter. When is the due date?

By saturday, midnight, eastern time.

i'm in...i'm feeling creative lol

hmm. . .i may be too late, but if you dont mind a 6th entry. ill throw this one in.

I am
This mirrored image stands before me,
Thoughts developing from what I see,
This soul I inspect with scrutiny.
I am the star, the sky has left behind,
I am the presence that lingers on your mind,

These words I speak, are spoken like a mime,
I am the wounds that only heal with time,
I am an uncut diamond waiting to shine.
I am the an imperfection covered by gold,
I am the solace battering your soul,
I am the vulnerability that never grows old,
I am but a corpse, so lifeless and cold,

I am the flaw keeping you whole.
I am the innocence that left as it came,
I am the voice ensuring you are sane,
I am the chance you missed yet again,
I am the stardust that fades away with the fame,
I am the wound, which leaves you in pain.
I am the beauty you will never see,
I am myself and that has set me free



hope you like. . .

M

This is STUPID

YOU CANNOT RATE POETRY OR WRITING BISH!

Hey i can't enter i'm gunna be too busy i think sorry guys...at least there's room for you now maso

Its not rating.

Its which one you like best.

Lol.

sucks to hear ilc, soory.

nah that's fine man kick some ass though lol.

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Originally posted by ilovecoheed@1 Hour Ago
nah that's fine man kick some ass though lol.

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hahah, i will certainly try :P


good luck to all by the way.

Mine will be in tonight, then i'll make the voting.

Falling from your life
Wandering all the time
Fallen from your lies

Something more simple
Somthing for the afraid
Trivial complications beyond burden

Building a country
To live on the dead
The World is made to die on, where you found it

Life is deceiving
In a jealous world
It is our decision to move on

Drifting in a sea of destruction
Slipping further and further in disease and hesitation
Complicated solutions beyond words

Running all the time
Falling from your lies
Running for your life