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the emotion is Sadness
here its is guys, a sotw sig i hope i get some votes man.
C+C is more than welcome please please tell me if you like it.
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/6...motions9hi.jpg
Its not mynros' style its LIKE mynros buts its not his.
i dont really understand the emotion but still its an awsome sig also some of the hair looks a bit choppy near the ends
i think the stroke on the text on the left is too big.
Overall, its badass, i love how you made the 2 objects at the left, behind the chracter's hair, blurry as to show the focus on the face,
Thanks everyone.
1. text has no stroke or effects.
2. the blurred objects suggest depth, closets to the camera will be blurred while the focal point is the render in perfect focus, good job noticing that DJ.
3. the emotion is sadness or mourning due to a loved ones death
Thanks for C+C please keep it coming guys
Me no liking the text at all, its monotonal and its just all confusing and IN FOUR FACE MUTHA FUCKA WHETHER YOU LIKE IT OR NOT!!!! doesnt make sense, it could be great, spend more time on it.
i agree with DJVSilentKill on this 1 it is amazing how u did tht almost reminds me of what mynros does with his sigs...overall nice sig dude well done
the blurred objects are awesome, except maybe sort out there pixelation a little they don't go well with the very fine cut render and the text... it's overall an awesome signiture though
Fix the text and you got a winner. Great work man!
i keep hearing about the text.. whats wrong with it.?
also i cut out the render myself its in the resource section. Thanks for the C+C people, keep it coming.
id darken it up a little (the text).
That is a vast improvement over what you've been doing, I see you're putting much more thought and planning into it as well, which is very apparent, in the sudden jump of quality within ur sig. I saw ur other sig, which was great attempt too and I am going to keep all my comments here instead of repeating myself.Quote:
Originally posted by AntidotexXx@3 Hours Ago
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/6...motions9hi.jpg
Its not mynros' style its LIKE mynros buts its not his.
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What you're producing now, imho, is good, I think it can be great and there are no 'but's here.
However I have some pointers. You got a good feel for this sig and kept the colors matching thru out and I think you need to carry that thru with the lighting within the render, as in there are some places in it that need toned down slightly the brightness around the hair etc.
Your placement for objects, you'll really need to think before you blur it for perspective, so far I'm only getting perspective from one side, and that makes it a little odd and its affecting the balance
The sig feels alive, and maybe u've adjusted the Hue&Sat to bring that out better? If not, try it, I'm going to keep waffling on about that until you do. Personally a little less brightness and her hair on the egdes blured, (the strands) bc I can almost see the cuts. Rather than radom objects this time I think, something else would achieve a masterpiece of depth in that sig dudel maybe a brack wall, fencing, obvious stuff, hell my fav is chains - its rare to find a sig I dont get a chain in there somewhere, but thats more of my trademark within a sig lol -althou what I'm saying is we dont always need to use a random object, althou what u did was inspired use of 'that technuque' little more work would be perfect, but I'd like to see some tighter grouping to help fill some empty areas and remember, I'm ranting on bc you do have talent, it was laying about ur feet now your churning some eye-catching designs!
My thing is, I dig those colors, and much of the quality and feel of this sig, is also partly due to the use of a great render that you've worked and edited near perfectly to make it your own great job.
I do take the move into this area of sig design demonstrates u want to do something new (which I am sure well progress into other designs), unfortunately for a while, anyone comparing your work to mine, is perfectly what I'd expect to happen, ur emulating, then you'll invent and then we all will see some really amazing work coming from you.
I have no copy right on this 'style' I just furthered it, if anyone here is a photographer or serious about gfx design, that technique is employed all the time. I would try get selective with it bluring this, and often it can led to hours worring over 'too much or too little' lol, that comes with practice and I'm near positive between each sig you're working away at something else.
Ths is great work, and i AM looking forward to seeing more,.
Wow, after that speech there isn't much to say. There are only a few things that i can say since this isn't my style and sill probably never be. For one, the left needs to have less contrast, like he said about perspective. Also the text needs some serious work. For one get rid of the forn and get one that is either more of a script of something that looks like it would be the title of an anime. Like i said myrnos knows more about this style then i do, but i said what i could. Keep it up anti.
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Looks like the feeling is getting a blow job not sadness from death.
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Nice one, although the front yinyan is a bit pixelated it's still cool!
Text is just awesome!
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Thanks everyone.
Oookkk... I was going to post something smart, but then I read mynros' post and ... I can't really say anything that he hasn't already.
Great work =D
*Bows deeply*
best ive seen from you yet antidote ..looking forward to more *applause*
anyone else have any comments or suggestions? i really need this because this is going in SOTW.
Thanks to all.
look i like the way u used the img with the hole idea...but i think that u sould add some pattern or something also the text man it is 2 big add a smaller and add some wind like the colour of the img also i think that a set of fraktals will do a perfect job in this img...add some white only in a corner and not very good seen
Also i think that u should add some blur and a smalll border with a white stroke....!!!!!
Look man u told me to C+C
u have done a very good effort i can tell but add more brushes m8 do not stay only in one of the img and use more ur imagination.....
in my opinion, the ying-yangs are too blurry, and they should be less opaque. otherwise, a nice signature.
I love it, honestly :D
It's real simple but great looking and rich in *atmosphere (* from the dictionary O.o)
I agree with SnaP.
