Dance event flyer

its kind of WIP, but i dont no what i can add...

need help please :D

http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/7...ntflyer8ma.jpg

i want to change the yellow font color of the titel....dont know wich :(

(its illustrator btw)

Looks good! Although it's a bit dark at the right so you can hardly read the text there...

But it looks cool! :)

Agreed, lighten up the gradient. Nice job man.

Dont use the the black BG.

Change it to white. (Will save alot of many on printing)

The text is reallly hard to read due to the font.

Other then that, good work!

You spelt January wrong. :mellow:

Looks cool but you should make it so the womans hand doesnt disappear behind the black thing at the top

ok thanks for replies,
january spelled wrong :P thats how you spell it in my country, i was a bit confused i guess.

good point on the arm, ill lighten up the gradient but i want to keep the BG black.

if you have a flyer in your hand, it looks way different then on a screen. things will be better readable.

can someone help me on the title and the "urban meets gala"? dont like the color or am i the only one? that thinks that.


Edit: other things i want to change:
-her legs are hovering but her arm is holding on to the top, going to stretch it out so they both ar out of the gradient.
- her dress is JUST touching the edge, i want it either to be cut off or stand free, not barely touch it
-the " urban meets gala" text is touching the lower gradient, dont want that
- the information on the prices and so on has to be perfectly lined up.

how is this?

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6...ntflyer2xr.jpg

This looks ten times better

amazing what a couple of small things can change eh?
but am i the only one that thinks the color of the title does not match the rest of the flyer?

Much better!

But... Are you really going to use it then?

no :) but cant it be perfect anyway? :D :D

for the title make it so that the gradient shows through sp it looks as if youve cut the text out of the black strips

Man this looks real oldschool, like something you'd see in the 70's. Pretty good. :)

the font is still a bit hard to read where it's black, what is that? impact? it looks too smushed up and you have to strain a bit to try and read it.

the font name is actually haettenschweiler....

not the funky one, the information lettering...that needs a bit more work.

I think the Impact font looks perfectly fine...

There is one thing you might do. For the title, if you wanna make it really retro, you could make yellow and black stripes coming out of the text, so it looks like a vector shine or something.

And about the "urban Meets Gala", well, it seems too big and out of place. Maybe a different font?

Other than that, looks really awesome. I love the retro feel, and the cleanliness.

yes the funky one, nthe retro one is called Alba.