Im proud :)

This is the first template ive done without a single tut and personally, for me i think its quite good...

PLEASE REPLY ABOUT THE SECOND VERSION IN THE POSTS BELOW!!!!

Please C+C and tell me how to improve it not jut say its shit, its good etc...

If you aint got anything nice to say dont say shit motherfuka :lol:


O yeah, the banner is in process so will be improved dramatically and the button is an idea... C+C on the button if you like but not the header unless its the overall idea of it or whats been done to it so far, and yes the white lines are suposed to be there, part of my classy anti rip hehe

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/288...enie0xc.th.gif

bump,
Anyone?
Bill, bob? geoffry?

I dont know much about webdesign but i know i really like this one! Looks nice and clean.

I have done a bit more to it and changed bits because its for my bro's site and he wanted me to change a bit :P

Ill show the update in a bit when i done a bit more ;)

UPDATE

I really need help on improving the banner please... Thats the ony part im not to keen on...

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/1710/screen8ao.jpg

Make the edges more defined aroud the blue thing. They're to smooth.
Try some feighnt fractals or something.

I like it, very swish ^.^

Thanks crofty mate :D
Whats the best way to cut a part out and it looks rough but not pixely?

Any more?

Hmm. Maybe something Really , really feighnt under the content boxes. A swish scroll bar. And nope.. it's good ^.^


Err the cut out thing.. i dunno. I mean, just make the bevel on it more defined. But it's still ace. So don't worry about that.

What about now? i just got finishing touches to do but ill probably still end up editing loads...
What about the header now?

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/626/screen4ve.jpg

Absoultely awesome :D Looks very professional. Are you actually making this into a website. or just designing?

You can do me a favour now -> Digital art. Leave the crowd ^.^

man that doeslook VERY professional great work!

It will be my bro's site because currently its just a white BG with text and a few images...

He made a few changes and they weren't too nice IMO but its what he wants so its up to him ;)

Ill update this when its finished probably tomorrow but it may not be so nice with his touches :lol:

Well, at the moment it looks very standard and basic. I could say somewhat tutorialish but i'm guessing you aren't a newb. I don't know if you are keeping those fonts, but I wouldn't because they don't fit in well with the design. Also, a design like this would look relativlely good if done in flash.

He only wants a small standard site so people on dial up/mobile phones can get on with no problem etc.

He used to have flash but it was not very quick on a mobile phone :\

Looks good Ben ;) I like the header - i think the middle blue bit would look nicer if it was just the tiniest bit lighter. (*cringes in case of more slap manouvers...*) Definetly 100% better than anything i could come up with tho! lol =)

No its fine you can post in this forum all you want i dont care :lol: Just aslong as i get the intro forum, look at the last posts ;)

It's pretty good.

Kenny thats no help :(
You need to see what you like and why otherwise its pretty pointless ;)

LOOKS COOL the blue suits it and i think all the text should be that colour just maybey add a bit of animation to the banner when it first loads up but dont set it to a loop, maybey have the top part slide up or down ??

He dont want anything fancy because people with dial up go on a lot i think

ahh ok thats thoughtful but i cant really suggest anything but maybey darken the drop shadow on the content boxes still look cool and professional

Im thinking of adding a little bit more detail but cant think what to add, any ideas?

Maybe add more "stuff" in the two spaces on the top... Like interfact dent thingeys or tech brushes or even a render or something...

Its for a business site so a render wouldn't go well :lol:

I did add some cool indets but i dont think i saved it O_o

Its for a business site so a render wouldn't go well :lol:

I did add some cool indets but i dont think i saved it O_o

Wow Ben, that's really good man. I'm glad to see that you are improving with all of your hard work. The redone header does look Ace, very professional. Nice job man.

Cheers man good to see you posting again :) And look, i have owned you in post count!!!! :lol:

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Its for a business site so a render wouldn't go well :lol:

I did add some cool indets but i dont think i saved it O_o

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Eh, if it's a business site take the pic of areal person... Doing something.
Or navigation links at the very top, that works good too.

I was going to put links at the top but he said he prefered them at the side and its his site so meh i just doing what he wants