The Last Fall

again a new piece o.O

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29213634/
4th part of my end of the world series.
hopefully itll be 12 pieces and ill get them printed out as a calendar somehow for 2007 :P

well... any comments?

It took a fiar bit to load but im not moaning about that, it just gets worse :lol:

The top is 10/10 the top half of the sun is 10/0 that large black thing is too in your face, down to a 9.5/10 and then the trees just kill it, they are too bright and dont look real even though they are lol :lol:

Apart from those two things i fucking love it, awesome job ^_^

Just please fix the trees :(

Yeh i like it , too heavily colour balanced though, and the trees = bad. + there's weird lines coming off of the big ball of flames, not lines as in ------. Kinda ... some darker some brighter O.o if that makes sense which it probably doesn't...

I gotta agree with Ben... It's wicked sick but I think the trees are WAY too sharp or somethin... Great job though.

i really like the fireball but i dont really like the rest. i think the trees are way too contrasted. I think the space is lacking depth and the smoke/fogish stuff looks wierd, though i do like the streaks of smoke on the left in the upper left. But overall i think the red is just too 'red' if that makes anysense. i think the colors are just to dull.

i must agree with all the other it looks so nice!! but only the trees are killing this nice picture..and i don't like the text but overall good job!!!

http://www.deviantart.com/view/29213634/
I uploaded a new one to DA, any better? i know its kinda hard to see the difference now, but meh. i darkened the trees.

thanks for the comments.

I didnt want to draw any attention away from the fireball, so i left the space kinda simple and dullish.

It wasn't because they were too bright. It was because they look almost fake, the colour of them is too red imo. =)

i think the comet is very well done and theres nothig wrong with it just you need to deffinatley work on the trees and amybey the sky :)

I also agree with this opinions... but you made really good job with the fireball :) looks like it blow everything in a sec :D

the monotone red colors just dont go with the birght and vibrant colors of the fireball.

I can only agree that the fireball, comet or whatever the hell it's meant to be is amazing, stunning and awesome, you look at the top and you think wow.

As has been said though, it's the bottom that completely fucks with it all and ruins what would otherwise be an awesome if not perfect piece of work.

I just really really love that fireball. Although to help with the bottom you might want to brighten the trees nearer the centre because the fireball would be shinning light on them if you know what i mean.

The entire down-to-earth part needs work, but i agree with everyone else. That comet/meteor/fireball is fucking awesome.

lol. my opinions on this are totally opposite than yours, guys.

Im not too crazy about the fireball, and i think the trees look just fine :lol:

i have no idea what to do about the trees :(

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That comet/meteor/fireball is fucking awesome.

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the trees... dont look too bad. honestly, i think its just compared to the fireball, they arent AS good :D