its not too good, it took me ages but i dont care if you hate it, please r+c
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/19685.png
version two, the coloring is bad - i know
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/19716.png
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its not too good, it took me ages but i dont care if you hate it, please r+c
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/19685.png
version two, the coloring is bad - i know
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/19716.png
oooh, I like it. did you make the background yourself? I love it.
I like the color too, gj on coloring the robot ^^ the techbrushing looks good. the only thing is the text, it doesn't look that good. Too thick border, and maybe change texteffect to overlay or something cool. The b&e doesn't looks that good eighter. Other than that. Good job. This is you best one so far I think. 8/10 now, with different text - 8.5/10
cool thanks, i didnt draw the robot but i did color him - ive been working on this for the whole of the day cause i had to get brushes, this was it b4 i got teh brushes
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/19632.png
(i used brushes for the bg so yeah i did make them, if you call brushing making )
yes, i know..
of course brushing is making ^^ stealing is not making, that I know xD.
well as I said, I think that you've done a good job, do you think you colut tell me where you got the tech-brushes from? maybe we could trade? ^^
yeah i got them off deviantart, ill try to find them
theyre actually kinda useless cause they are military based ones - you would do better asking other people..
heres the url: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6104503/
and heres another tech one that looks decent:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6784197/
Thats really nice Deep Blue.
Looks great. I think mabey changing the blending mode of the text, as jerner said, would make it look better.
Very good job. 8/10
when i change the blending mode it makes it look see-thru tho which i dont really want
not bad! very ery nice dudee!
in english please?
jk, thanks
I think your text needs to stand out a little more, and the tech lines are to visible, about a 7/10
ya its wickid. the background is the best. you found a robot kinda like jerner, did u find were jerner gets his robots? 8/10
eh im not too bothered, that was a brush after all - i dont mind them being too visible, ut thnaks fro the constructive criticismQuote:
Originally posted by Oblivion@Mar 6 2005, 04:36 PM
I think your text needs to stand out a little more, and the tech lines are to visible, about a 7/10
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nah i think it looks fine
couldnt really get the colours right but heres the blue/teal version ;)
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/19716.png
The blue one kicks ass!
I still think that the text that says Deep Blue should either be a different font or a little bigger,
Red-7
Blue-8
maybe make it a little bit bluer :P higher saturation, it looks colorless to me, looks better though
you're wrong... i like the second most. :P
nice brushing, nice robot but i don't really like your font.. B)
8/10
Change the blending mode of the robot so it blends better with the background. Apart from that really nice, i like the ideas, colours, and style. Good job.
8.4/10
arrgh i cant find a better font, i had to redo the colorization with the blue cos i didnt save but now i cant get the font to look right...
the text looks better on the second one, the stroke isn't that big. good job. why don't you download one that fits if you can't find one, that might help xD
i ment i cant find one to download that will fit, ive already downloaded 3...
Great stuff Deep Blue,
Blue one looks much better than the red, and if you used it in your sig it would fit better. The red one would be strange when your name is "Deep Blue" but thats just being picky :P
Really nice work 8.5/10
lol thats why i did the version two, as much as i like grey and red i decided if i were to use it it would have to be blue ;) i searched these three things on dafont: space, robot and speed but non of them looked good