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Hi! Lately I didn't have much time to make new stuff but now I want to share with you my new work and I need honest critique :) please, tell me what should I improve in such type of spacescapes... any help'll be appreciated!!
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The distant planet ruins it :(
The cloud is a little brisk and it looks like a stock and if it is i know cloud is supposed to look like that but not a good stock, also where you've done a lighting effect, you've cut it off up near the top all the terragen work though is nifty
Funny.... I've seen a Sci-Fi porno called that.
Pretty run-of-the-mill space piece. The clouds don't look believable, something with the lighting.
clouds should be a lil darken but still looks good.
2nd planet sux. texture, lighting and shadows are rly ugly and not realistic
frame isnt so good too.
but the best part of the whole image is space and stairs. its f*kin great and realistic. great job with making stairs and distant effect.
6/10
thanks for comments :) it helped me a lot :)
its friggin beautiful ya bums.lol( new wallpaper)
Something like that shouldnt be framed, the text should be like a crystal glass look ontop of it, thats not a techy picture, its quite fantasy, therefore you need to re-work the typography.
The planet needs a lot of work too. In the dark shadow parts of the planet, its all just 1 colour, you've darkened it and at the same time lost the contrast. The texture is ok but could be better. Clouds are pretty nice. The shooting stars could be reworked a bit and below it slightly, it looks a bit messy. Also when you think your done, sharpen it!
Other than that, its pretty nice, make those changes and i'll be awe'd.
Wow thats really nice, work on the texture of the planets imo
At a first glance it looks good apart from the planets.
The closer one is good just not the lighting and the second one i dont like at all sorry dude ;)
I like the space but to the right of the planets its a bit weird and the sky is not black, i know the sun is up but that would not change space would it? Surely if the sun is coming up you would not see all the stars?
And i really dont like the clouds sorry man :(
I like the terragen (was it?) But it looks odd with no ripples.
Overall a great job better than i could do, if you meant any of those things than my bad but i cant see any reason why they was meant.
Keep it up :D
thanks for honest opinions :) well, my purpose was to make dreamy look picture, not super realistic but I agree with your opinion... there's a lot to correct. Well, hope my next gfx will be better ;)
Yup it does give a dreamy picture. Like the others said, the textures can use some work even though you did a good job on them. I wish there were more colors though. I like it overall. Most of the other people already mentioned the main changes that would make it better. Great job man.
