the first one is made with ggrungebrushes, no renders. took 20 min. I think, and there should be about 13 layers in there, I know it looks rather flat, but I don't have time to fix that at the moment. I started making the second one with nothing but grunge-brushes, but ended up with an abstract brush/renderbg xD I guess it's a little bit out of both. Took about 25-30 min. of spare time ^^ I'm aware of that bith of them are missing borders, but I don't really care, since it's the brushing that matters.
I would like some comments :) and critique works just as fine :huh:
i love the first, although itd grunge its looks kinda abstract, i love it - 8.6/10
second is ok but i dont like the crystal on the left, its sticks out too much.. the ice effect is cool though ( get it, cool ) hehe.. umm 8.2/10
would you mind telling me where you got the brushes you used in the first??
03-08-2005, 04:04 PM
Dale
I love the brushing on both of them. The red one just looks a little cloudy though. And the render isn't too visible.
But the blue one *jaw drops* Fantastic, depth, colour and effects all rock. The style is also very good, tech / abstract / grunge which seems to fit nicely, which is surprising for such a dwide range. The text is good, it isn't invisible but stands out a fair bit. All they need is a pixel border
8.3/10
8.9/10
( this is once you hgave put the pixel border on )
03-08-2005, 04:12 PM
jerner
thank you very much.
deep blue: I know there is a little gap between the crystal and the rest, I'll try make it float more with the rest ^^ thx.
crofty: first of all. I also think the render isn't that visible in the first one, hmm, maybe that's because I haven't got one in it?! xD if you read the text far up you'll see. thank you for the comments on the second one too, I'll fix those borders alright.
03-09-2005, 09:48 AM
Oldeback
cool... i dont need more than some brushes and a pixel font to make a sig ? B)
great job, i like the blue one better :) as said: make a pixel border and make the ībig crystal like the others
8.3
8.8
03-09-2005, 10:44 AM
jerner
thank you for comments and reaplies, apprecciate it ^^
Well, I got some updates, and I'd like to know what you think of them, I litsened to your critique, and I tried my best. And btw, I just wanted to try something new with something I made myself with the grunge, red one, so you know, I wasn't that serious xP. well, here they are:
and i think that you should use more of your drawed pic in the red one :)
03-09-2005, 10:47 AM
robgasm
hehe its the cool dudes from your drawing, they dont fit in but its nice blending ;)
and yeah the blue one is much much better
03-09-2005, 04:01 PM
jerner
lol thanks, I know, deep blue, that they don't fit that well, but when I moved them to the right side of the pic it looked a lot better. Maybe I'll make a sig out of it, It's fun to have your own pics in them :P
03-09-2005, 04:10 PM
Samuel
I actually like the first blue one better, the crysta. makes it look wicked. That first blue one is great, i dont like the red one much. The sencond blue is alright. The second red is a big improvement from the first red one.
First blue one... 9/10
First red one...7/10
Sceond blue one....8/10
Second red one....7.8/10
03-09-2005, 04:13 PM
Illegalx17
3 letters W-O-W! man your goooood! jeez i wish i could be good at grunge
03-09-2005, 04:27 PM
jerner
Bigfatguy: thanks a lot :D really glad you think that the second red one is approved :P.
Illegalx17: thanks, lol the grunge one is my 2nd one really :P but thanks!
03-09-2005, 09:43 PM
Samuel
No problem :) im always glad to hepl someone out on their art :)
03-09-2005, 10:08 PM
masokist
first one is pretty cool, especially for being only brushes, and the second looks really good, good job on them both.
